Scenes From My Balcony

i have written this while seeing different things around here on my balcony:)

Fight about parking vehicles

saying this is my place not yours..

People talking to each other how are  their lives going on..

Shopkeeper selling goods ,

or can say fooling people,

giving improper goods in higher prices..

Dogs are barking as they usually do..

Everybody is happy in their own way,

why couldn't you...

Fresh air is blowing saying to me..this is life my dear..

Don't wait and  see..

play cool..everybody has to play his part in a tough path called life..

nothing is easy my dear

but you can make it by yourself

Take right decisions,

Stay calm,

Think positive,

Believe in yourself,

Ignore others if required,

work hard,

and we will get there soon..

Author's Note

Please do review ..i hope you will like this piece..rate it also
honest opinions required :)

Reviews

[Haifa]

Take right decisions,
Stay calm,
Think positive,
Believe in yourself,
Ignore others if required,
work hard,
and we will get there soon..

That's very true. But too bad not many people do that. But I also hope that when they read those lines would feel and go ahead in their lives. Great job!

[Tasha]

I loved this a lot. You have such a beautiful balcony. You gave a very nice description. :)

[jessica Wray]

i like it a lot

[DarkAspen]

Very nice, not sure what to say about it though.

[Sukriti Suki]

I loved the picture. I expected some serene poetry about nature but you describe something very human, the everyday problems. Maybe the different coloured fonts symbolise different kind of people..I liked this.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Very good. i love the honest description of the world from a distant/ far away view. Good job!

[Brad]

you have beautiful view from the photo, but your observations are of the human race, nice contrast

[Eile MacIntyre]

Palm-like trees I meant. :)

[Eile MacIntyre]

First off, love that view in the piture. Don't have palm trees where I live.
Second, lovely poem. 'Fresh air is blowing saying to me... this is my life dear'. My favorite line.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Good to look at the world from a distance. I like the description of people and places. The ending was very good. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for a excellent poem. I like to hear other people view on life and the movement of time.
Coyote