Scenes From My Balcony

i have written this while seeing different things around here on my balcony:)

Fight about parking vehicles

saying this is my place not yours..

People talking to each other how are  their lives going on..

Shopkeeper selling goods ,

or can say fooling people,

giving improper goods in higher prices..

Dogs are barking as they usually do..

Everybody is happy in their own way,

why couldn't you...

Fresh air is blowing saying to me..this is life my dear..

Don't wait and  see..

play cool..everybody has to play his part in a tough path called life..

nothing is easy my dear

but you can make it by yourself

Take right decisions,

Stay calm,

Think positive,

Believe in yourself,

Ignore others if required,

work hard,

and we will get there soon..

Author's Note

Please do review ..i hope you will like this piece..rate it also
honest opinions required :)

Reviews

[Haifa]

Take right decisions,
Stay calm,
Think positive,
Believe in yourself,
Ignore others if required,
work hard,
and we will get there soon..

That's very true. But too bad not many people do that. But I also hope that when they read those lines would feel and go ahead in their lives. Great job!

[SpokenWord]

Sitting in silence allows us to view the busy world like this and to hear our inner voice of reason and truth. We do have the answers inside of us if we just sit and listen like the person in this poem. I guess sitting on the balcony can be not only relaxing but therapeutic.

[Victoria Everly]

Another very colorful work. Also I like the point of view here. Good job.

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Kat24

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Very sweet! I agree with the ending! And yeah, it is fun just to sit outside and watch the world!

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Namaste to you as well, my brother in soul.
Your writings are very refreshing; so much a part of everyday reality. You express how common places, people and everyday things, help us acknowledge and show greatfulness, valuing the simple things in life

Namaste

[Sara Mercury]

get 'THERE' soon. The word 'their' is a term of possession, not a term for place, such as 'here' or 'there.' Just worthy of note.

I especially love the line ' believe in yourself.' This poem sounds very familiar somehow...

[SageMusic]

I think we can find beauty in the every day things. It is them, all added up, that make the days, weeks and years of our lives. I really liked the description of the life scenes going on below you and felt like I was standing there for a moment!

I like the overall message of the poem. The scenes are common but good. I like how you took the time to change the color of each 'scene'. I would like this more with a little more description. It feels kinda idk, sterile?

[?]

Life as it is
Love the view
Nice descriptions
I could see it all taking place, step by step, bark by bark, arguments, smell the fresh air and feel the wind bowing.
Very nice

[Lily Mae]

I love it, you show us the view of both worlds.. And I have to agree you ended it well.. xxx