Scenes From My Balcony

i have written this while seeing different things around here on my balcony:)

Fight about parking vehicles

saying this is my place not yours..

People talking to each other how are  their lives going on..

Shopkeeper selling goods ,

or can say fooling people,

giving improper goods in higher prices..

Dogs are barking as they usually do..

Everybody is happy in their own way,

why couldn't you...

Fresh air is blowing saying to me..this is life my dear..

Don't wait and  see..

play cool..everybody has to play his part in a tough path called life..

nothing is easy my dear

but you can make it by yourself

Take right decisions,

Stay calm,

Think positive,

Believe in yourself,

Ignore others if required,

work hard,

and we will get there soon..

Author's Note

Please do review ..i hope you will like this piece..rate it also
honest opinions required :)

Reviews

[Haifa]

Take right decisions,
Stay calm,
Think positive,
Believe in yourself,
Ignore others if required,
work hard,
and we will get there soon..

That's very true. But too bad not many people do that. But I also hope that when they read those lines would feel and go ahead in their lives. Great job!

[Victoria Thornton]

Very visual! I like it!

~!Be Your Own Hero!~

[Hello, Goodbye]

creative stuff

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. That's quite like India. Full of chaos and confidence. I liked the whole thing though I think you should change the 'his/her' it sounds rather unpoetic. And I it would be a bit better if you could say where we'd get to in the last line.

[Akshat♥]

Timtim @ i just point out the words which have a deep meaning in this poem..so i used different colors ...

[Timtim]

I think it has a great concept, but lacking imagery. the outward look at things is great, and i do love the simplicity that your poems come with? I do have a question, why the change in colors of the letters and words?

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

A good descriptive poem, both in picture and emotion.

[JENY]

poem..is depicted in two portions....
one what you observed i the world outside...
and then you switch on to...your intimate inner musings....
a good combination....
liked it...

[Crayon]

I like the remote point of veiw, setback from what is going on. Well done.

[Judy Ponceby]

I enjoyed this. The descriptions of your observations were very real, the ending was very well done. Some spelling errors. I like how you took the observations and directed it into a positive force at the end. :) Nice