Scenes From My Balcony

i have written this while seeing different things around here on my balcony:)

Fight about parking vehicles

saying this is my place not yours..

People talking to each other how are  their lives going on..

Shopkeeper selling goods ,

or can say fooling people,

giving improper goods in higher prices..

Dogs are barking as they usually do..

Everybody is happy in their own way,

why couldn't you...

Fresh air is blowing saying to me..this is life my dear..

Don't wait and  see..

play cool..everybody has to play his part in a tough path called life..

nothing is easy my dear

but you can make it by yourself

Take right decisions,

Stay calm,

Think positive,

Believe in yourself,

Ignore others if required,

work hard,

and we will get there soon..

Author's Note

Please do review ..i hope you will like this piece..rate it also
honest opinions required :)

Reviews

[Haifa]

Take right decisions,
Stay calm,
Think positive,
Believe in yourself,
Ignore others if required,
work hard,
and we will get there soon..

That's very true. But too bad not many people do that. But I also hope that when they read those lines would feel and go ahead in their lives. Great job!

[arlery]

I really like it!
You did a wonderful job with the descriptions.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good. I really, really like this.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

Thank you! My path has led me to many experiences and today I am so happy with how the creator has made me, as I am.
We will make it, we always do!
Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[Abbie]

i really like it all,and the colors just add a splash of playfulness to it great write:)

[Rayne Stanton]

i love how you threw in everyday occurances in the beggining of this poem, its really great and makes a connection with the reader :) very well written!

[Julie Beth]

this was reallly really good great job :)

[Bennett Logan]

I really like the slice-of-life nature of this poem. Just the sights and sounds of life from a single point at a single moment. Truly a breath of fresh air. I also like how you end the poem in a reflective, meandering thought. It feels like I'm sitting right there on that balcony, feet up and taking in my surroundings.

[Midnight_Mystery]

love how u describe everything..another wonderful write. :)

[Sarah McConnaughey]

Great detail and descriptions. I love how you incorporated everyday life into this wonderful poem. Well done. :)

[felioness]

the statements made are worthy of thought and a fine foray into both the pettiness and largeness of humanity but it is a write that does not appeal to my paricular poetic taste. i tend to be drawn to poems that use more poetic devices than this particular piece.