Scenes From My Balcony

i have written this while seeing different things around here on my balcony:)

Fight about parking vehicles

saying this is my place not yours..

People talking to each other how are  their lives going on..

Shopkeeper selling goods ,

or can say fooling people,

giving improper goods in higher prices..

Dogs are barking as they usually do..

Everybody is happy in their own way,

why couldn't you...

Fresh air is blowing saying to me..this is life my dear..

Don't wait and  see..

play cool..everybody has to play his part in a tough path called life..

nothing is easy my dear

but you can make it by yourself

Take right decisions,

Stay calm,

Think positive,

Believe in yourself,

Ignore others if required,

work hard,

and we will get there soon..

Author's Note

Please do review ..i hope you will like this piece..rate it also
honest opinions required :)

Reviews

[Haifa]

Take right decisions,
Stay calm,
Think positive,
Believe in yourself,
Ignore others if required,
work hard,
and we will get there soon..

That's very true. But too bad not many people do that. But I also hope that when they read those lines would feel and go ahead in their lives. Great job!

[Calypso]

Amazing. This poem was so simple but so mind blowing. You were able to describe your world in a way I only wish I could. You have talent!

[Suchita]

Life has got change...
Green has been replaced by Grey..
Trees by buildings...
Out here in this running world.. if we wish to find some peace...then all we get is what you expressed..
... And luckily if we get one place then our mind never lets us to be in Peace...
This is really LIFE... Tough but Worth Living...
Nice read ... :)

[Richard Williams]

Practical well done poem about the real thing.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Observent peice about your surroundings.. Greatly done

[Revolutionary]

I like the way it seems happy then sad.Confusion is hard to express in poetry,but you did it well

[Kes]

Believe in yourself,
Ignore others if required,
work hard,
and we will get there soon..

Is it selfish that I live by those words?
Such a familiar little write. Made me feel warm inside. :) I've seen views from many many balconies - I travel a lot. Ironically, for someone who feels so at home curled up on one, there isn't a balcony at my home. lol
Great write. Inspired some great memories.

[Jazique]

All random but, connnected in our way as we get mixed up in the little things in life of business. Well done .

[April Child]

The scene you portray outside your window is a nice comforting one. Life happening, not dramatic just everyday things going on as they do. At times we need this kind of antidote to the confusion that can go on inside our own minds. Last stanza is a nice kind of gravity to all that. Keep calm and carry on!

[TamiViolet]

Yes, it's all happening right this moment....and changing... Sounds like you have it figured out, my friend...the formula for success and happiness... tis a difficult one to follow, at times though... You have acute observation skills, and I love all the colours to symbolize all the different events that take place in this thing called life. In addition, you have discovered that we all can't be happy... I guess it's part of some master plan.... But we can certainly dream and have faith, yes? I like this...