Scenes From My Balcony

i have written this while seeing different things around here on my balcony:)

Fight about parking vehicles

saying this is my place not yours..

People talking to each other how are  their lives going on..

Shopkeeper selling goods ,

or can say fooling people,

giving improper goods in higher prices..

Dogs are barking as they usually do..

Everybody is happy in their own way,

why couldn't you...

Fresh air is blowing saying to me..this is life my dear..

Don't wait and  see..

play cool..everybody has to play his part in a tough path called life..

nothing is easy my dear

but you can make it by yourself

Take right decisions,

Stay calm,

Think positive,

Believe in yourself,

Ignore others if required,

work hard,

and we will get there soon..

Author's Note

Please do review ..i hope you will like this piece..rate it also
honest opinions required :)

Reviews

[Haifa]

Take right decisions,
Stay calm,
Think positive,
Believe in yourself,
Ignore others if required,
work hard,
and we will get there soon..

That's very true. But too bad not many people do that. But I also hope that when they read those lines would feel and go ahead in their lives. Great job!

[Saumya]

very beautiful and lovely sentiments here....

these words, in a way take the readers to the world today, which is full of hustle and bustle...

the world, where everyone is, and always wants to be self centered
the world, where dwells only human bodies, devoid of hearts..
and the world, where people just want to attain everything by paying and knowing only the cost, but rarely value..!!

sadly, all seemingly little but great fault of the world today..!!

the ending stanza acts like a soul to this poem, which delicately wraps all the really essential elements
required to live a good and peaceful life today:)

alll over, a very optimistic and wonderful read and write..!!!
welll done..!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much Saumya :)

[Saumya]

youre wlcmd:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the message of this poem.. the last stanza just nails it. Wonderful images from your balcony. Nice job.

[Akshat♥]

I am glad that you loved it :)
Thank you :)

[beautiful life]

lovely imaginary :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Anuvart]

Well done!!

[Hitman]

wow,nicely written:)

[sudeshna]

i could visualize every line as if i m standing with u there.... so i really liked it

[Lively]

You are awesome buddy!!!!

[PaperDoll]

All the world is a stage... as seen from your balcony. Well done. :)

[Jeff Loquist]

simple and thoughtful...so much can be attained by simply looking out the window

[patricia]

Loved the last seven lines in this, I liked the poem because it was looking outward, and I loved the...ignore others if required. Thanks