Someone Strong

Someone Strong

A Story by Akshat♥
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This story is about a child who doesn't have a father...still fights with life and get our it:)

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This is perhaps the hardest part of growing up without a Father… 

I have to do lot of thinking,
make a tough decision everytime.

Everybody does feel sorry for me..
but no one feels the way I do

My Mom took very good care of me and my sisters, 
I watched her struggle for too many years 
just trying to keep food on the table.

We managed but I never want to be put in a situation like this.
where I am forced to do the things that i never wanted.

A fathers love can't be given to me from anyone no matter what. 

A lot of times I try to think about who I would be if I did have my father around 
and I honestly dont think I wanna know.

I like who I turned out to be.
I like the fact that I had to struggle to get to where I am. 
I like the fact that I had to endure some hurt and pain ..
Now I am Stronger because of it.

I'm happy to say that a little while ago Me and Mom did have a terrible relationship 
and today I am happy because more than anything, today I can call her my friend
So living without a father did not turn out to be so bad after all. 

Am I affected by it today? 
Yeah I am.

I am in search of that type of love but at the same time 
I know that everyone cannot give that genuine love that a father can give

I can only say..Be strong in life
you never know what is next...

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
please do review it...i don't mind either good or bad...
rate it also:)

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This is sad and sweet.. bittersweet and honost, it is hard growing up without a father. I was lucky enough to meet my real father when i was 14yrs old.. He didn''t walk out on us, my mom just hated him so much she wouldn't let him be a part of our lives.. This write really touched my heart.. It is hard growing up without a father.. I think it is beautiful..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I related to all of this, and loved the wisdom that came when you described how your sufferings made you stronger. Thanks

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sad and sweet.. bittersweet and honost, it is hard growing up without a father. I was lucky enough to meet my real father when i was 14yrs old.. He didn''t walk out on us, my mom just hated him so much she wouldn't let him be a part of our lives.. This write really touched my heart.. It is hard growing up without a father.. I think it is beautiful..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And Yes I Liked The way your Expressed Your True Heart Feelings... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Whatever happens in life is just to make us strong...strong....strong...stronger...Strongest...
All you need is to have Faith on yourself and a Smile on your face...
No Matter What Life Is Still Not That Bad.... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad, but uplifting. The ending is nice, it shows hope.

Posted 13 Years Ago


just amazing :)
you really spoke from the heart!
ta hand, kärleken alltid
Me


Posted 13 Years Ago


That was just marvelous. I'm speachless. You might have fix a few puncations but, other then just as a reader it said so much. It really spoke for those who don't have father and you told them resurring words that with or without a father they can still be someone, they still be strong, they can still be their fathers child. Way to go to potray the fatherless child in a new light rather then sarrow but, greatness. I really enjoy these lines the most:
"I like who I turned out to be.
I like the fact that I had to struggle to get to where I am.
I like the fact that I had to endure some hurt and pain ..
Now I am Stronger because of it."
Well done poet of the heart.




Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting piece focusing in on realities and speculation.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hello,
Thanks for sharing your life with me and I appreciate the thoughts you put in telling your story. I love to read of another persons struggle in life. Sure would be nice to be seen different from our family but as life goes on we seem to always remember the good times and try to forget the tough times. I put myself in stories to better understand the meaning and if it sounds or seems nice like a nice pair of shoes then I will pick it up and use.
I feel so humble reading others stories. Thanks!
Life and Light to you and yours....
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its a very inspiring piece. I love it and it makes you want to get out there and fix it right then and there. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥
Akshat♥

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