Someone Special

friends are for life time...

When we met

We never knew

that we would be friends,

friends forever. . 

Things change differently

than the way I thought

things are so similar

for both of us

We share a lot

We respect each other

We do the things that no else does

You makes a plan to meet at some place

I was shy to do the same.

We do all the things in similar ways

don't know why.

You makes me Smile

Smile for no reason

For the past few days

things are going in a different way

I don't know what is going on in your

mind about me.

All I know is I'm happy. . . 

Author's Note

tell me what do you think about this...review this..

Reviews

[Geralyn Miller]

First I will be the grumpy editor, then the sugar to help the medicine go down.
First Stanza, third line: replace "gonna" with "would"
Second stanza,second line: change "as" to "than"
Third stanza, the final word should be "does"
Fifth stanza, first line: try "We do all things in similar ways"
There, now that I have gotten over my grammar grumpies, your poem is an absolute delight, a wonderful work of Frienship. Your poem makes me happy.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

When we have a special friend, then the world is always a beautiful place.

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a tender expression of friendship.. of that which lasts and brings life's deepest joys... It is a lifting poem to be sure..

[Helen Crutchett]

Stay happy my friend, that is the main thing. I hope things work out for you....this was a delightful read. (Loved the graphic too!) ~ Helena :)

[J. Lynn]

I love it!! I mean no offense to Geralyn, but I think it's okay to put gunna. It's your own write, you put things in your own words. Which makes this poem even more personal. As it is in your words and from your heart it is unique! And I think this is an amazing write about friendship.
Keep up writing :)

This is a sweet poem. An innocent feeling flow of words. Perhaps the beginning of love but maybe not yet realized. very nice job.

[Stef Outsiders]

I like the way use a different format, and colors.. it's simply but full of meaning, friends we need them and its clear she makes you happy... good job!

[Holly]

So awesome Hun, I love how it's simplistic and honest, looking at life through a child's eyes yet not at the same time. Very awesome read

[Richard Williams]

A sincere poem and honest, a pleasure to read.

[Michael Jarrell]

So cute! almost looks like it could be a childrens book! Love it

[Libby]

Reminds me of my friend c: