Tree

feelings of a tree...

    

I am alive D****t

I give you

 fruit

I give you fragrance

I give you home to live and grow

I give you shelter

I give you shadow

I give you fresh air

I give you different medicines

I give you all I have

Because of me you are alive

You give me suffocation

through pollution

You take my life 

by taking away water

You didn't give me the care I need

You only have the habit of cutting and

making money out of it

You didn't care about me

You only care about yourself

If I'm alive

You are alive

I am the Tree D****t. . .

Author's Note

Review this as you like...give some suggestions my way:)

Reviews

[jay-lyse]

Very important, and a unique topic. I like how open-minded you were. It almost sounded like an actual tree speaking. And I also liked how emotionally connected you were. Feeling the tree's pain, how it suffers and how we as humans sometimes abuse its importance without a second thought. Very Interesting!!!

[GreenSkeleton16]

oooooo bravo :) I like how you used a tree being angry at us. So wonderful

[Saumya]

a very descent and wonderful topic, to write about....!!!!
first of all, i would say..the image of the tree that you have put here, is really outstanding...!!!!!
i just loved the image....200/100 for the image itself...!!!
secondly, i really appreciate the lovely and really painful feeling that a tree has.....this again, is vey intensely eloquent....!!!
thirdly, and most essentially, i loved the deep bitter, but the literal truth, that:
"it is a human tendency to neglect things, given in abundance and free of cost.."!!!!

so, as a whole it is a most wonderful composition that can define the feelings of a tree..!!!

so, i shoud say:
this was a reallllllllllllllllly splendid poem....!!!!
very well done...!!

keep writing and rocking,

take care,
good luck,
saumya

[Akshat♥]

thank you dear:)

[Saumya]

most welcome....!!!
:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I agree, trees are important and without them, we will surely die. Good monologue from the perspective of the tree.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

important topic and you have written it well

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

I am a reviewer d****t :P

[Anuvart]

We should stop cutting trees ...right now!!
Nicely written again :)

[Hitman]

expressed well about a tree:)

[kaylynnmelody♥]

I love this!

[light and ashes]

This makes me sad :( Its true. We are human beings. We are selfish and foolish. We could stop alot of the damage to nature but we don't cause we're too lazy or some other reason.

[MoriartyMesa]

I enjoy the different view than what if normally given for a tree, a point of view that is rare and nice, little rough in the message. But over all nice work and wording.