I Used To Know You

You are so different 

When I know you

You made me calm 

When I saw you

This is all different for me

To make you feel

what I can feel

You are so different from others

But you are all the same like me

We used to play

We used to talk

We used to fight

We do all the things 

that are worthwhile

Now,You are all changed

Don't know why

Now,I see you as an image

in my dreams

I used to know you from the start

But now I blame myself for knowing 

you that far

I used to know you my dear. . .

Author's Note

i wrote this when i'm bored taking lectures . .
Review this...give me suggestions...thank you:)

Reviews

Good write , but I would have preferred a bit more structure in this , I really think that would bring out the punch ..

My favorite lines :

I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far

...

this I feel is the centerpiece .. sometimes I feel as if a poem is centered around one single line or stanza of expression and the whole poem centers round it to fit itself to its expression .

There is one mistake at the start :

You make me calm
When I saw you

will be

You made me calm
When I saw you

[Linear]

It's yours, comes from the heart, and yes people change, move on, we have to pick up the pieces and start over :O)

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful!

[howlfjdks]

Letting go...

[HopelesslyDevoted]

beautiful work once again

[Amy Bumpas]

Yes, people grow, people change, and that's why it's
so hard to find our true selves.

[sarah]

Man I feel the same way!!! This is amazing

[SpokenWord]

"I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far

This is so true, this part that you wrote here and how large of this person to see
this for themself.

People change completely every 10 years or so, it takes a lifetime to really know someone, and when you finally know them they up and change because life is all about change and growth. Very beautiful poem here, wanting to know that person you once knew while knowing you have to get to know them all over again like the first time.

Now I loved how you used the picture with the word hope to start the poem off. Creative and visually stimulating. Sweet is your pen that inked this poem for us to read.

[Khaaki]

A strange web of relationships. Human behavior is something inexplicable at times. You have drawn a beautiful picture here... well done

[Brad]

no suggestions...you've made a very astute observation of human relationships and the circle we follow on needing one another...but sometimes, that other changes to something else