I Used To Know You

You are so different 

When I know you

You made me calm 

When I saw you

This is all different for me

To make you feel

what I can feel

You are so different from others

But you are all the same like me

We used to play

We used to talk

We used to fight

We do all the things 

that are worthwhile

Now,You are all changed

Don't know why

Now,I see you as an image

in my dreams

I used to know you from the start

But now I blame myself for knowing 

you that far

I used to know you my dear. . .

Author's Note

i wrote this when i'm bored taking lectures . .
Review this...give me suggestions...thank you:)

Reviews

Good write , but I would have preferred a bit more structure in this , I really think that would bring out the punch ..

My favorite lines :

I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far

...

this I feel is the centerpiece .. sometimes I feel as if a poem is centered around one single line or stanza of expression and the whole poem centers round it to fit itself to its expression .

There is one mistake at the start :

You make me calm
When I saw you

will be

You made me calm
When I saw you

[kyrie]

This is great. I like the contrast between the fond way you speak of her and the true sarcasm that lies underneath. At the end, you see the bitterness, the regret. This is touching.

[jessica Wray]

this is really good

[iamkim]

If there is something that is constant in this world, it is CHANGE. It could be for the better, or it could be for the worst. We just have to accept the fact that nothing will stay the same, even if we badly want it to like that forever. It may hurt us, but that's how things really are.

Nice poem!

[Blossom]

good write. though I think it would be better if there was more structure to this, I like the topic of this.

[Chris38]

Well we all have people we think we used to k ow and now things seem to have changesd and they are like a different person. Well written.

[A]

I agree with Abhijit about the tip, other than that it's a spontaneous good poem.

[Megan]

I really like this one, so relatable. It reminds me, like the comment below, of how life changes and sometimes people change with it, how we can't always have them nailed down and how they are not always going to be the same...

[?]

Nicely written, we all grow and change at times through out our lives. This is life.
Sometimes good, sometimes bad.
Very well expressed here

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Kat24