I Used To Know You

You are so different 

When I know you

You made me calm 

When I saw you

This is all different for me

To make you feel

what I can feel

You are so different from others

But you are all the same like me

We used to play

We used to talk

We used to fight

We do all the things 

that are worthwhile

Now,You are all changed

Don't know why

Now,I see you as an image

in my dreams

I used to know you from the start

But now I blame myself for knowing 

you that far

I used to know you my dear. . .

Author's Note

i wrote this when i'm bored taking lectures . .
Review this...give me suggestions...thank you:)

Reviews

Good write , but I would have preferred a bit more structure in this , I really think that would bring out the punch ..

My favorite lines :

I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far

...

this I feel is the centerpiece .. sometimes I feel as if a poem is centered around one single line or stanza of expression and the whole poem centers round it to fit itself to its expression .

There is one mistake at the start :

You make me calm
When I saw you

will be

You made me calm
When I saw you

[Sofea]

I can sort of relate to this poem. Thank you for writing it, it's beautiful :) and to think that u actually wrote it when u were bored! Good one (Y)

[Katie_Steele]

A very good poem. Speaks loudly for its self!

[Hayley]

I like this. Good job.

[:)]

I like the way you are just remembering and looking back as a little flashback and a small epiphany.

As if you were drifting into a daydream away from the reality of boredom perhaps. :)

[Kes]

I like it... it sounds maybe a tiny bit disjointed, but i still like it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

People do change. People can get more interesting if we ask questions and get to know them. A very interesting poem. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jazique]

Nice. bordem is an inspiration sometime. You think you know a person. Well done.

[Julie Beth]

some of the best writting happens when your bored i like this one sometime you think you know someone then they go and change on you it can be very frustrating you did a great job on this :)

[Theodore]

well you came up with a good piece while you was bored, I like it well written..

[Stef Outsiders]

Simply and sweet verses... full of meaning, it's great when boredom strikes cause that is when your best work irises... like here! great job!!