I Used To Know You

You are so different 

When I know you

You made me calm 

When I saw you

This is all different for me

To make you feel

what I can feel

You are so different from others

But you are all the same like me

We used to play

We used to talk

We used to fight

We do all the things 

that are worthwhile

Now,You are all changed

Don't know why

Now,I see you as an image

in my dreams

I used to know you from the start

But now I blame myself for knowing 

you that far

I used to know you my dear. . .

Author's Note

i wrote this when i'm bored taking lectures . .
Review this...give me suggestions...thank you:)

Reviews

Good write , but I would have preferred a bit more structure in this , I really think that would bring out the punch ..

My favorite lines :

I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far

...

this I feel is the centerpiece .. sometimes I feel as if a poem is centered around one single line or stanza of expression and the whole poem centers round it to fit itself to its expression .

There is one mistake at the start :

You make me calm
When I saw you

will be

You made me calm
When I saw you

[Where the night sky and..]

I think this can be used not just for others but an internal one. I hope I am not writing in code haha. Very Nice~

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Its a great poem the message in it is deep and weight but the poem itself doesnt carry that weight...its the loss of a friend indirectly and i think it should have a sad melancholy to it rather than an indiference!
All the same its a good read,provokes thought:it sure did make me think of someone!overall, great poem!

[rielovella]

Nice poem of yours. While reading this, I remember my old friend...

[Brook Hughes]

Great write, i can understand where this is coming from. I used to have a best friend, that knew me and I knew her and she just changed into a totally different person. Keep writing!

[patricia]

I realy liked this poem, it captures so well the way we can grow apart, thankyou.

[Dana Kathryn]

I really like this.. It spoke to me as i know it has to others as well...Often when we are bored,we start to think of past loves and friendships long lost..Sometimes the hurt one can cause us will linger on forever...Things can get better with time..but time does not heal the deepest of wounds,the ones in our hearts and as deep as our soul..But God must have his reasons... Very good write!

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

very nice :) This poem really got me at the heart. I have felt exactly like this once before, still kinda do :P This poem really caught my eye in the RR, especially the title. thank you for sharing that with me! :)

[Carolina Kel]

The structure seems a little all over the place and be careful with present and past tenses. Other than that, I like the idea presented here.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

It's really sad when friends and lovers drift apart. This is a really sweet poem, and I like the cute picture you chose because it really goes well with the poem.

[Katub]

Good write, I llove how your saying that you used to know them, i think everyone can relate!