I Used To Know You

You are so different 

When I know you

You made me calm 

When I saw you

This is all different for me

To make you feel

what I can feel

You are so different from others

But you are all the same like me

We used to play

We used to talk

We used to fight

We do all the things 

that are worthwhile

Now,You are all changed

Don't know why

Now,I see you as an image

in my dreams

I used to know you from the start

But now I blame myself for knowing 

you that far

I used to know you my dear. . .

Author's Note

i wrote this when i'm bored taking lectures . .
Review this...give me suggestions...thank you:)

Reviews

Good write , but I would have preferred a bit more structure in this , I really think that would bring out the punch ..

My favorite lines :

I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far

...

this I feel is the centerpiece .. sometimes I feel as if a poem is centered around one single line or stanza of expression and the whole poem centers round it to fit itself to its expression .

There is one mistake at the start :

You make me calm
When I saw you

will be

You made me calm
When I saw you

[-Scribe in Style-]

a depth in simplicity

[brenda]

i love this !! i can relate to this realy well there wa this guy that we talked for three whole days and the he just dissapeared now when we see each other its like he is another stranger to my life!!

[moderndaypeterpan]

I feel ya on this one. This is pure. I like it.

[Awkward]

"I used to know you from the start
But now I blame myself for knowing
you that far"

Strong lines. Good job. Thank you for sharing with us. Great poem.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Very well written...I can personally relate. I do think Abjhijit had some good pointers

[Theresa C Newbill]

You still know, only the spirit energy has evolved and taken a different path from yours. Perhaps for the better, for you. Trust, that your paths will one day converge again, and you will recognize one another within the purity of universal love. A beautiful poem.

[thoughts of jade]

great write... its very simple yet full of emotions too. i felt the feeling your poem conveys... keep on writing!

[misha]

This is good but I would work on your sentence structure, other than that good job.

[Just Brooke]

I love it. I can relate to feeling this way and I like how you trailed off on the last line. Even with it's simplicity it has power and is very deep. If I were you I wouldn't change it, it has it's own unique style, that makes it catchy and an emotional read.

[Nickson Lailo Reyes]

though words are mere and not high-faluting, it connotes meaningful ideas that made it beautiful and worthy to be read. Each line is exquisite, invokes high feelings or emotions. Irregardless of grammars, Keep up the good work. Thumbs up!:)