Miracle

All the things we see, they are all miracle...

Naturally Impossible Events

are what we call Miracles.

Meditation can bring Miracles.

People usually consider flying in air or

going in water without mask a miracle.

But I think the real miracle is not 

to fly in the air or going into water 

without a mask,

but to walk on earth.

White clouds,A Blue sky,Green leaves,

the Black curious eyes of a child,

Yellow Grains,Spring Season.

All is a Miracle.

There is Nothing like spending quality time with great Friends.

A single Mom who's working and still

finds time to take her kids out,

making good  food,

that's a Miracle.

A single Dad who's working whole day and earn money

to make their child live in a healthy environment,

that's a Miracle.

A Youngster who says no to Fast food

and yes to healthy food,

that's a Miracle.

Realizing good things in us

and making them better

that's a Miracle.

You should realize that you have the power.

If u want a miracle,Be the miracle.

You all have the divine spark.

You all have the gift for bringing

bliss and glee to the world.

See after feeling this.

You feel strong from inside..

that's a Spark.

Bring this Spark alive in you

and see the real world.

This world containing all things in it,

is all a Miracle.

Author's Note

I write this while seeing a miracle today.

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

this is a poem full of wisdom and truth...
People usually consider flying in air or
going in water without mask a miracle.
But I think the real miracle is not
to fly in air or going in water
without mask,
but to walk on earth.

that line made me realize a lot of things... thanks for sharing this poem to us...

[Peony]

I like that the clear message this piece captures. Great job!

[A Lone Creative Nomad]

There were several times that the grammar was off. That being said, I loved the meaning behind this. It needs a lot of revision, but it was a well thought out poem. Keep the idea and the flow, it just was easy to get distracted from all of the small mess ups.

[sushi]

loved it. Felt more like an not easily breakable ionic bond.

[Sherene]

this indeed is a great piece of work. i do believe in miracles. everything that happens around is a miracle. We all have the gift in making others happy.
You are right.. Want a miracle, be the MIRACLE !! I agree to that.

[Larrycall]

i love it

[.shalynn.009.]

"is what we say as a Miracle." This should be "are what we say". I also like that you capitalized Miracle, almost personifying it.

"going in water without mask a miracle" This should be "without a mask"

"earn money" should be "earning money"

"A Youngster who says no to Fast food
and yes to healthy food,
that's a Miracle." This made me laugh. The world we live in where THAT is a miracle...kinda sad.

I love how you describe such simple things and things we generally view as ordinary adn mundane as such miracles. And I really liked that you wrapped up the ending with the part about the "Spark". Well done, another lovely little poem. And I hope the miracle you were watching wasn't too fleeting.

[Jazique]

I like the everyday miracles that happen is such a miraculously thing. Nice picture and I loved the way you made certain word stick out. It was very creative way of writing and done lovely.

[Art Sun]

this is a very good way of seeing all the good within this world...Miracles are everywhere its all how one see's them...

[sarah]

I love the different colors u used in this poem great work!