Miracle

Miracle

A Poem by Akshat♥
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All the things we see, they are all miracle...

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Naturally Impossible Events
are what we call Miracles.

Meditation can bring Miracles.

People usually consider flying in air or
going in water without mask a miracle.
But I think the real miracle is not 
to fly in the air or going into water 
without a mask,
but to walk on earth.

White clouds,A Blue sky,Green leaves,
the Black curious eyes of a child,
Yellow Grains,Spring Season.
All is a Miracle.


There is Nothing like spending quality time with great Friends.

A single Mom who's working and still
finds time to take her kids out,
making good  food,
that's a Miracle.

A single Dad who's working whole day and earn money
to make their child live in a healthy environment,
that's a Miracle.

A Youngster who says no to Fast food
and yes to healthy food,
that's a Miracle.

Realizing good things in us
and making them better
that's a Miracle.

You should realize that you have the power.

If u want a miracle,Be the miracle.
You all have the divine spark.

You all have the gift for bringing
bliss and glee to the world.

See after feeling this.
You feel strong from inside..
that's a Spark.

Bring this Spark alive in you
and see the real world.

This world containing all things in it,
is all a Miracle.

© 2015 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
I write this while seeing a miracle today.

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this is a poem full of wisdom and truth...
People usually consider flying in air or
going in water without mask a miracle.
But I think the real miracle is not
to fly in air or going in water
without mask,
but to walk on earth.

that line made me realize a lot of things... thanks for sharing this poem to us...

Posted 13 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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We all need to take the initiative to strive for our decisions to be made for the greater good of all, in this we also have miracles. The miracle is in fact within us, but some try to hide that spark for selfish purposes, to snuff out that flame. This poem brings forth the reality that even the most simplistic gestures can be viewed as a miracle.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a really wonderful poem. Sometimes, we need to take a moment from our busy lives and just look at all of the miracles that surround us every day. This poem really is quite beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great write, the poetry is wonderful and very true.

Also, the picture seemed to go along with it very well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a good piece and describes well the world as you see it all around you. You do need to work on some grammar and punctuation a little, but I could still understand what you were trying to say. Good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vivid imagery, nice poem:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really love this , brought a warm feeling to my heart thankyou for including me in your miracle .............. many blessings x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem! I love the theme- about everyday miracles over the phenomena we are accustomed to celebrating. I also find it interesting how you chose to format it with colors to evoke certain emotions. Have you considered playing more with punctuation?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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very wise write. So much to be said in this.
Nicely written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The colours are quite off putting, so I am struggling to appriciate the poem for the words as it is hard to read. Maybe you could do a colourful version, then put a normal, black and white version beneath for people like me? Sorry if this causes you problems, its just I really want to read it and be wowed as I'm sure I will be, but its difficult at the moment.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, every day can be a miraculous one, if we feel it inside. We are all a part of the miracle of life; it's sad for those whom do not understand this. This was a very insightful and beautiful poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥
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