God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[A]

I admire the colorful lines, lovely idea! I am a strong believer I enjoyed reading this poem and felt its meaning within my heart, beautifully written... God bless you... And my God help us all, great job.

[Kat24]

Hi,
this is really good and so true. Kat24

[A Risen Heroine.]

I'm not a huge believer but I do believe there's a god, and god helps us, yet he gives us complications to get even stronger.
This is beautiful written!
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[abhas]

its a poem of faith... yes God is... how much depends on how much we are...

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful write, a lot of feeling behind this, and around this.

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Personally, I'm atheist. But I feel your connection with god in this poem. I'm glad you believe in something this strongly.

[iamkim]

God is good all the time :)

[Akshat♥]

You are not alone God is always with you:)