God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[TheFemininePad]

Hi Akshat. This review is from the perspective of a person that believes in a higher power, but doesn't affiliate with any known religions. This is just my own opinion as well. I believe that any person of any faith would enjoy this poem. It doesn't conform to any one belief. It shows the loving power of a God of many religions. I think you wrote this very well, and I have no suggestions on how to improve on it.

[SpokenWord]

God does have many names, The chief morning star, alpha and omega, first and last, Sheppard, Allah, God, Jesus and it goes on because is in everything and everyone. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I really like this. Very very good. Nice flow strong words. Favorite work of yours.

[Kate Hunter]

very well done. I'm so relieved to see this one after some of the other things you can find out there.

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

this is really good. i enjoy it. but i feel theres something missing from it...im not sure what though :
99/100

[Brad]

i reckon there's something out there...

[Chris38]

Found this beautiful indeed. Wonderful poem of praise to the creator.

[Stef Outsiders]

love the way you formatted this, makes a colorful read and respect to those who believe in the big man... stunning words and great piece!

[Alessander]

Very Old School. Ecstatic, declarative, a prophet twirling in the sun. I just wish i knew what "truth" is, or what "victory" would entail.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. We must have faith and belief in a life. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote