God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Saki!]

Great write. Indeed, God is Good

[Andrew Wright]

Definitely going in my favorites. Although I suggest a couple changes (the whole him/Him his/His thing)

A 100 from me for many different reasons .

[Mauricio Montoya]

Awesome write!

[kyrie]

A thoughtful exploration on God and ourselves. He truly is amazing, and it is ALL because of him I am alive.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I loved the font and the structure of this true content of this piece another great write

[Karli]

Love. Great expression, and the fact that I'm an insanely strong Christian just keeps me open-minded to this. It's beautiful, really. :)

[Greg Skura]

They say that truth must always be true. We are all of God and god consciousness is the goal of all.

[:)]

I love the colors, I hope you did it on purpose according to their meaning.
If not, for me you did. :)

[sarah]

This is very very true! Wonderful poem