God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Jazique]

Amen is right. Wonderful job and I loved the ending with "The pure belong to God and Victory is God's alone" Bravo to your work.

[Ginger]

Amen!

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful!

[Alana Michele]

Love it :]

[Quinn Blackburn]

Excellent thought-provoking piece. A lot I enjoyed here, although there is also plenty here for people to bicker over. Many paths lead to the same sun, in my perspective. Good wordcrafting!

[Akshat♥]

rate this piece...

[Shardbearer99]

What I love, when reading your work, is the fact that you are able to create such a mystical-fantastical land surrounding the use of your words. I am not a believer in God - but I don't have any problems with people that do - but I really liked the message you send to people in this poem. And I also really liked the pictures, too. Well done on creating a wonderful picturesque piece.

[Alicia™]

This is a beautiful poem, and the message is amazing. Great job.

You should capitalize God and He, though.

[Kelley Quinn]

Perfect. The conveyed message is amazing

[Ian Faraway]

I could easily argue this poem and its meaning, but I respect your views on religion and I believe people can believe what they want. Whether it be false or even true. We all believe something, I don't believe in this. I believe there's a God, but he is not kind.