God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you everyone:)
I really appreciate you all for reviewing my poems...

[deeps]

This one is really amazing, I loved this one.
So well written.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

The last line summed up the whole poem pretty well. Great write.

[Yina]

This absolutely beautiful and completely true!:) Wonderful write!:)

[-Scribe in Style-]

He will never disappear
You cannot lose him.
He will never leave you
You cannot choose him.

:) Well written piece.

[indu]

you are very straightforward and honest in writing. loved this poem :)

[Blue Eyes]

This is very true of what God did for us. Nice write. :)

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

You have written this so poignantly and beautiful. It is a very toughing poem and thank you very much for sharing this.

Anne

[Suchita]

Nice read...
Really GOd is the only one... He is in every form... at every single place...In everyones heart... He is there whenever we need him...But all we need to do is to feel him around.. Then we will realize that he is really the only one...
I have a great Faith on God..Moreover i consider him as my best friend...:)