God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Saumya]

truly majestic..!!!
God, our heavenly father has the biggest heart one can ever have,
he's the most forgiving, one can ever see,
he's what we feel him to be..!!
but yes, whatever he is ,he is the most lovely and trustworthy
if you really see and feel...!!

these are the words, in which i try to define God :)

wonderful presentation,
well done...!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Saumya]

most welcome....!!!!
:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

A lovely dedication poem to God.. beautifully written

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear:)

[beautiful life]

God...
my best friend
lovely poem:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Aethereal]

This is a magnificent poetic personification of the Fabric of Reality. Bringing the Mysterious Unknown down to a human level so we may bargain with it about our eternal fate makes us less fearful of it. Poets have been using this personification technique for thousands of years. You’re following in the footsteps of that great poetic tradition. When we assume that our magic chants and rituals give us control over our fate, then we feel better about ourselves and others. How we feel at this moment is the most important thing of all.

[Akshat♥]

Totally agree with you..Thank you for this wonderful review:)

[smilempsn]

this is about The Almighty..!! Sorry cannot be reviewed ^-^

[Akshat♥]

lol...i agree somewhat :P

[smilempsn]

:P

[Anuvart]

I believe in god :)
He is everywhere with me..

[Hitman]

God is everywhere:)

[Kenneth The Poet]

I am into a generic divinity myself. Nice colorful work.

[Cancelled]

God meaning:
1. Allah
2. Buddha
3. Jesus (My God)
........ which one?