You made me

one person can become your world

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Your lips, my biggest weakness

Your Smile, my biggest distraction

If you need me 

I'll come running

from million miles away

Just to see you one last time

One last feeling closer to you

I won't ever hesitate to give you more

If you need something let me know

I will do everything to make you happy

to bring a smile, a sweet smile

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

You made me spin on my feet

You made me feel heaven in hell

You made me believe that i can live happily

You made me a person that i never was...

You are everything i had

Your one touch can do miracle

Your one effort can solve hardest problem

Without you i am nothing...

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Author's Note

i write that i feel like doing it..
you decide that you like it or not...

Reviews

[Megan]

I like how the people in this poem seem to be connected, intertwined. and how the repetition of the words "you cry i cry" and "you happy i happy" seem to strengthen that. it makes me get the feeling that these people were in love in an interconnected way, and they are a part of each other, a love that can't be broken. i love the feeling this poem brings. togetherness.

[Ruth]

Beautifully from the heart love, a perfect poem of sentiment!
xx

[Glenn]

It is very difficult to open up to someone like this but once you do, it is all over....I love it, reminds me of myself.

[Akshat♥]

yeah Angelina Paige i noticed that right now..
i write whatever came on my mind on that particular time...
so i have changed it...
thanks for telling that:)

[Brad]

NEVER let them now your weaknesses!! good god, man!! hahaha...beautiful ode

[HopelesslyDevoted]

"Your lips my biggest weakness, shouldn't have let you know"
just wondering... did you know that that is a line from the song "U Smile I Smile" by Justin Bieber?