You made me

one person can become your world

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Your lips, my biggest weakness

Your Smile, my biggest distraction

If you need me 

I'll come running

from million miles away

Just to see you one last time

One last feeling closer to you

I won't ever hesitate to give you more

If you need something let me know

I will do everything to make you happy

to bring a smile, a sweet smile

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

You made me spin on my feet

You made me feel heaven in hell

You made me believe that i can live happily

You made me a person that i never was...

You are everything i had

Your one touch can do miracle

Your one effort can solve hardest problem

Without you i am nothing...

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Author's Note

i write that i feel like doing it..
you decide that you like it or not...

Reviews

[Megan]

I like how the people in this poem seem to be connected, intertwined. and how the repetition of the words "you cry i cry" and "you happy i happy" seem to strengthen that. it makes me get the feeling that these people were in love in an interconnected way, and they are a part of each other, a love that can't be broken. i love the feeling this poem brings. togetherness.

[Greg Skura]

Nice!

[jessica Wray]

i love it it is really good u must love this girl a lot

[?]

This kinda brings us into your heart, we see, we feel what you feel. Very nice,
Sry but I dont agree with Coyote, not always when you give love is it returned.
The world would be a better place if that was true. (Sry Coyte) lol
And I know that it doesnt work that way in mine. Never thought it could be true until I met someone else, But this someone else I or he cant be with me or him. lol
This is alovely and very expressice poem, and I love it

[Chris38]

Simple but very effective. Loved th different use of colours

[RJM]

I can feel that you are deeply in love with whoever that person is you have right now. Beautiful poem really expressive and the effects of the different colors were nice adds an aesthetic kick to the whole poem. Nice write

[A]

Expressive of sweet deep feelings, very loving and romantic, we all wish for somebody to feel this way about us, lovely poem, keep it up.

[iamkim]

i like the way you express your feeling :)

[Ian Faraway]

I like it but it needs to be

"You're happy
I'm happy"
Instead of
"You happy
I happy" (It's grammatically incorrect)
Other than that I loved it!

[Denise]

I love the innocence of the line "you happy, I happy; you cry, I cry" That to me is all I really need to say to the one I love the most. So simple, but so profound

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The set-up of lines made the poem stronger and the purpose come alive. Life is a fair journey. When you give love. The gift will be return back. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote