You made me

one person can become your world

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Your lips, my biggest weakness

Your Smile, my biggest distraction

If you need me 

I'll come running

from million miles away

Just to see you one last time

One last feeling closer to you

I won't ever hesitate to give you more

If you need something let me know

I will do everything to make you happy

to bring a smile, a sweet smile

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

You made me spin on my feet

You made me feel heaven in hell

You made me believe that i can live happily

You made me a person that i never was...

You are everything i had

Your one touch can do miracle

Your one effort can solve hardest problem

Without you i am nothing...

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Author's Note

i write that i feel like doing it..
you decide that you like it or not...

Reviews

[Megan]

I like how the people in this poem seem to be connected, intertwined. and how the repetition of the words "you cry i cry" and "you happy i happy" seem to strengthen that. it makes me get the feeling that these people were in love in an interconnected way, and they are a part of each other, a love that can't be broken. i love the feeling this poem brings. togetherness.

[Dilan Gray]

I love this poem! This was so beautiful! You captured this so well and I loved the images you showed. This poem was so wonderful! "Your lips, my biggest weakness
Your Smile, my biggest distraction" were my favorite lines.

[Theodore]

very beautiful well written....

[Where the night sky and..]

Very cute~

[Amanda_Rose]

this is very sweet. you are very romantic. i love that poetry allows us to express our deepest emotions, even if in everyday life we cant. this poem makes me smile when i read it. its very beautiful thank you

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Well I like it, this was very sweet. Great Job!

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

I love it!
Good job

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[Deviant Works]

Awww! This was adorable. Big romantic here so this could not have been more sugary. My favorite line and made me grin when I read it was, "Your one tough can do miracle". Still brings a smile to my face. Sounds a lot like love and I wish you the best!

[Shardbearer99]

I know how it feels to really like someone, that you always seem to feel happier, you smile more when think about them. And that's how I feel; even when I just receive a text message saying hi from her, my heart feels like it's beating a hundred miles per hour. I really enjoy reading your work, mate. You're really good. Thanks a lot for sharing this one.

[sarah]

This is so sweet! I love romantic poem! wonderful job