You made me

one person can become your world

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Your lips, my biggest weakness

Your Smile, my biggest distraction

If you need me 

I'll come running

from million miles away

Just to see you one last time

One last feeling closer to you

I won't ever hesitate to give you more

If you need something let me know

I will do everything to make you happy

to bring a smile, a sweet smile

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

You made me spin on my feet

You made me feel heaven in hell

You made me believe that i can live happily

You made me a person that i never was...

You are everything i had

Your one touch can do miracle

Your one effort can solve hardest problem

Without you i am nothing...

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Author's Note

i write that i feel like doing it..
you decide that you like it or not...

Reviews

[Megan]

I like how the people in this poem seem to be connected, intertwined. and how the repetition of the words "you cry i cry" and "you happy i happy" seem to strengthen that. it makes me get the feeling that these people were in love in an interconnected way, and they are a part of each other, a love that can't be broken. i love the feeling this poem brings. togetherness.

[Kelley Quinn]

I wouldn't say
You happy
I happy.
It sounds...cumbersome.
That's my only suggestion, the rest is good!

[Sweets]

this is amazing ._.
so friendly and loving !
great work!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I love how love can mirror your emotions and that's exactly how a lot of people will relate you did very well here I like this piece a lot thank you for sharing

100/100

[Mauricio Montoya]

one thing I will say, it comes from the heart.
great job!

[Nautili]

I love the simple language, kind of strips away everything and focuses on how this special person makes you feel........ I happy.

[DalainaRenee]

Very beautiful pome I can so relate right now

[Short.Nerd]

I love this!! I love the different colors you used too. It had a nice flow. Great job!

[Julie Beth]

i loved it i thought it was so sweet you did such a great job :)

[~Princess~]

I absolutely love it and so does my friend nathaniel good job hun. I love the exspression put in to it all.

[kyrie]

the simple way in which you tell your love is like a little one's rapture with a favorite toy. the direct way in which you proffess it shows the unabashed, open, beautiful love you have for them. Etremely well written and very lovely. :)