You made me

one person can become your world

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Your lips, my biggest weakness

Your Smile, my biggest distraction

If you need me 

I'll come running

from million miles away

Just to see you one last time

One last feeling closer to you

I won't ever hesitate to give you more

If you need something let me know

I will do everything to make you happy

to bring a smile, a sweet smile

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

You made me spin on my feet

You made me feel heaven in hell

You made me believe that i can live happily

You made me a person that i never was...

You are everything i had

Your one touch can do miracle

Your one effort can solve hardest problem

Without you i am nothing...

You cry

I cry

You happy

I happy

Author's Note

i write that i feel like doing it..
you decide that you like it or not...

Reviews

[Megan]

I like how the people in this poem seem to be connected, intertwined. and how the repetition of the words "you cry i cry" and "you happy i happy" seem to strengthen that. it makes me get the feeling that these people were in love in an interconnected way, and they are a part of each other, a love that can't be broken. i love the feeling this poem brings. togetherness.

[Ravyne Hawke]

I like the repetition in this poem.. it creates a sing-song effect. I also love the overall theme of this.. love, happiness, joy, with just a touch of sadness. Spelling error here:

Your one tough can do miracle -- tough should be touch

Great job.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

Picture says it all :)

[Akshat♥]

Maybe..maybe not!
Thank you dear :)

[Anuvart]

True love :)

[Hitman]

nice..

[alegria]

love these lines...
"You made me spin on my feet
You made me feel heaven in hell
You made me believe that i can live happily
You made me a person that i never was..."
written really really well....jus amazing..

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

You cry
I cry
You happy
I happy
those lines are just awesome :)

[Lively]

lovely

[-Scribe in Style-]

I love this poem!
Well written!
These lines make the poem intense:

You cry
I cry
You happy
I happy

They strengthen the emotion and build a connection between two people.

Your lips, my biggest weakness
Your Smile, my biggest distraction

My favorite lines...
Well written

[HorrorMaster]

really good it sound like a song