I can't live without you

feeling of loss

I can't live without you.
how should i tell you
I can't live without you.

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

you live in my heart
but you don't know about the feelings
for you inside me.
you always make me cry

I live
i die
with you only
trust me..
I am waiting for you
you are my heart and soul..

how should you live breaking my heart
you always get woe of leaving me

my life is lonely without you
without you what should i do
I always become sad
this sadness breaking me out..
I am trying but this is not enough for me..

I can't control
I can't wait
I can't think more
I can't live without you..

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

I love that... this is one great poem... I feel the emotions you put in this poem when you wrote this. I am definitely going to add this to my favorites.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

loved the heartfelt emotions emitted from this piece another great job your clearly growing as a writer

100/100

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job, well done.

[Kate Hunter]

well done, as always. keep writing!

[Julie Beth]

you really showed your emotions in this one i thought that this was sweet you did a great job :)

[kyrie]

I like this write. It's....undeniably heartfelt and honest. I have exeprienced that type of loss, and I think it comes over in waves, sometimes drowning us completely, other times just a nagging mud-puddle we cant break free of. The wording and grammar errors show the flurry of thoughts that race in our minds when we just can't live without someone. Awesome job, Ashu!

[~Princess~]

I love all the exspressions and ur heart feeling u put in it good job. perfection once again

[Marie Harrison]

This poem's full of passion and desire. Exhilerating for sure! Well written.

[Dilan Gray]

This was a very sad poem. You showed that very well, it was really well written. Good job,

[jessica Wray]

i loved it is was really good keep on writing

[Nat.]

this is cute but the only problem i have with it is where it says "doesn't" in the tenth line.