I can't live without you

feeling of loss

I can't live without you.
how should i tell you
I can't live without you.

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

you live in my heart
but you don't know about the feelings
for you inside me.
you always make me cry

I live
i die
with you only
trust me..
I am waiting for you
you are my heart and soul..

how should you live breaking my heart
you always get woe of leaving me

my life is lonely without you
without you what should i do
I always become sad
this sadness breaking me out..
I am trying but this is not enough for me..

I can't control
I can't wait
I can't think more
I can't live without you..

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

I love that... this is one great poem... I feel the emotions you put in this poem when you wrote this. I am definitely going to add this to my favorites.

[HorrorMaster]

Very good

[Nilesh Ratnam]

I liked the way you have presented your love!!!
But Bro tell her that... Girls never realize the love we have for them...
It's really a good way of presenting your love to her...

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Tell her with the words in your heart...:) If you try and fail, you at least have the satisfaction of having tried :)

[Holly]

Strong emotion in this one, maybe some grammar mistakes Hun, but that's no biggie, those are always fixable :) Ye got the message across and that is what makes writing so hard.

[Amanda_Rose]

i like how you repeated "i can't live without you" in a few of the stanzas. maybe incorporate that line into all the stanzas to really drive the point home.

[sushi]

Very well written. The sweetest words to listen "I can't live without you..."

[Jazique]

Awe the sweetest line you can tell the one you love "I can't live without you.." So nice work. It was very sweet.(work on punctuations and grammar)

[Sara Mercury]

Awww. Kind of sad, really. My advise to anyone in this situation is, don't be so weak of spirit to not be able to live without someone else. That's a sign of emotional dependence. Not a good thing. Chin, up, lad.

[Ginger]

Your words really pulled my heart strings. Job well done