I can't live without you

feeling of loss

I can't live without you.
how should i tell you
I can't live without you.

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

you live in my heart
but you don't know about the feelings
for you inside me.
you always make me cry

I live
i die
with you only
trust me..
I am waiting for you
you are my heart and soul..

how should you live breaking my heart
you always get woe of leaving me

my life is lonely without you
without you what should i do
I always become sad
this sadness breaking me out..
I am trying but this is not enough for me..

I can't control
I can't wait
I can't think more
I can't live without you..

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

I love that... this is one great poem... I feel the emotions you put in this poem when you wrote this. I am definitely going to add this to my favorites.

[Ravyne Hawke]

You've done a good job of expressing your feelings in this poem.. loss, sadness, loneliness. It almost sounds like true feelings were never brought to light.. and if she knew, she might have stayed.

[Akshat♥]

She knew still she left ...
Thank you dear :)

[Krystal17]

Very emotive lines. Very sad.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Izzy-01]

wow i couldnt have put it better myself your poetry is so real and it sounds like its comming from heart ......i realy liked this one

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[beautiful life]

nice

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Dakshta]

the second paragraph was just wow..

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Dakshta]

:)

[Akshat♥]

;)

[smilempsn]

hmm...
Sometimes our biggest happiness turns to our worst sadness...
People whom we know, becomes people we Knew....
The more we are close to someone, the bigger is the gap in our heart when they leave........
hmm....

[Akshat♥]

I completely agree with you... Thank you :)

[smilempsn]

hmm :)

[Anuvart]

Say the truth in any case...specially in this one :)

[Hitman]

so deep emotions:)

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

I can soo relate to this.
Your poetry inspires me! :)

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Such a strong write. love it :)