Forget me

Forget me

A Poem by Akshat♥
"

Forget me to ease your pain...

"

why two people close their eyes
when kissing?
Because they are so dazzled
by each other.
In that short moment
with my eyes closed...
I'll miss you.

 

 

I love you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

 

 

Forgiving... is giving your hate
just a little room in your heart.

 

 

How badly do I wish
to show you my heart!

 

 

You were the best thing
that ever happened to me.

 

 

How thankful I am to God
for having sent you as a gift to me.

 

 

I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me.

 

 

I smile,laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,

Since I am loosing my memory
but nothing can drive you
out of my body.


Although you've never told me
you loved me...
I know deep in my heart
that you love me.

 

 

Forgive me for leaving you.
Please...

 

 

For the last time
I have a favor to ask.
forget me..

 

 

© 2013 Akshat♥


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Dev
This is a very emotional poem, and I for one liked it a lot. Technically a few things are here and there (I've taken the liberty to edit your poem but it's just as a reference guide. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to.) The idea behind this write is very heart breaking; Losing a lover. Love isn't easy but I guess that's the way everything in life is.

Why do people close their eyes when kissing?
Because they're so dazzled by each other;
In that short moment, with my eyes closed, I miss you.

I have loved you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

Forgiving is giving your hate
Just a little room in your heart.

How badly do I wish to show you my heart!

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.

How thankful am I to God
For sending you as a gift to me.

I don't have to remember you;
You're a part of me.

I smile, laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
Since I am losing my memory,
But nothing can drive you
Out of my body.

Although you've never told me you loved me,
I know deep in my heart that you do.

Forgive me for leaving you.

Please!


For the last time
I have a favor to ask,
Forget me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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With Valentines day coming up a single person thinks of the past. Its so gut reenching have your heart broken.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Dev
This is a very emotional poem, and I for one liked it a lot. Technically a few things are here and there (I've taken the liberty to edit your poem but it's just as a reference guide. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to.) The idea behind this write is very heart breaking; Losing a lover. Love isn't easy but I guess that's the way everything in life is.

Why do people close their eyes when kissing?
Because they're so dazzled by each other;
In that short moment, with my eyes closed, I miss you.

I have loved you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

Forgiving is giving your hate
Just a little room in your heart.

How badly do I wish to show you my heart!

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.

How thankful am I to God
For sending you as a gift to me.

I don't have to remember you;
You're a part of me.

I smile, laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
Since I am losing my memory,
But nothing can drive you
Out of my body.

Although you've never told me you loved me,
I know deep in my heart that you do.

Forgive me for leaving you.

Please!


For the last time
I have a favor to ask,
Forget me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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RJM
Heart-breaking. Very cathartic poetry and very emotional the transition from good emotions to the sad ending is beautiful and smoothly done

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this is powerful. i dont have any words to even say! good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a deep and beautiful writing! The emotion is so powerful and strong, the love inside is so DEEP! Its so sad and touching, and how romantic it is! The ending is amazing...
'Forgive me for leaving you.
Please...
For the last time'
'I have a favor to ask.
forget me.'
I love these two staza MOST!
AMAZING!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very beutiful peice of writing you have here. it speaks of a lost love that can never be redeemed, but still the love of one another never dies. i agree with Undying Glory, the last stanza is very powerful. well done! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this sure was deep and potent work, i loved this a lot! this was so powerful and sweet, i love your stanzas, i really do. such wonders in this poem, methinks.

"I smile,laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
but nothing can drive you
out of my body."
now i think that the line "i might forget you" isn't very appropriate here, to me the very sweet mood was broken here. i know what you're saying but i think you could simply omit that line.
i suppose this is love as a friend since you put
"For the last time
I have a favor to ask.
forget me.."
anyway that was a real strong stanza. awesome work!


Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really sad and moving and it almost made me cry great poem it was so sad and touching!

Posted 13 Years Ago


please give honest reviews...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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