Forget me

Forget me to ease your pain...

why two people close their eyes
when kissing?
Because they are so dazzled
by each other.
In that short moment
with my eyes closed...
I'll miss you.

 

 

I love you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

 

 

Forgiving... is giving your hate
just a little room in your heart.

 

 

How badly do I wish
to show you my heart!

 

 

You were the best thing
that ever happened to me.

 

 

How thankful I am to God
for having sent you as a gift to me.

 

 

I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me.

 

 

I smile,laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,

Since I am loosing my memory
but nothing can drive you
out of my body.

Although you've never told me
you loved me...
I know deep in my heart
that you love me.

 

 

Forgive me for leaving you.
Please...

 

 

For the last time
I have a favor to ask.
forget me..

 

 

Reviews

[Dev]

This is a very emotional poem, and I for one liked it a lot. Technically a few things are here and there (I've taken the liberty to edit your poem but it's just as a reference guide. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to.) The idea behind this write is very heart breaking; Losing a lover. Love isn't easy but I guess that's the way everything in life is.

Why do people close their eyes when kissing?
Because they're so dazzled by each other;
In that short moment, with my eyes closed, I miss you.

I have loved you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

Forgiving is giving your hate
Just a little room in your heart.

How badly do I wish to show you my heart!

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.

How thankful am I to God
For sending you as a gift to me.

I don't have to remember you;
You're a part of me.

I smile, laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
Since I am losing my memory,
But nothing can drive you
Out of my body.

Although you've never told me you loved me,
I know deep in my heart that you do.

Forgive me for leaving you.

Please!


For the last time
I have a favor to ask,
Forget me.

[DalainaRenee]

I know how that feels right now! Well written poem!

[Shardbearer99]

That was very sweet and emotional. I really like how so many of your poems have such a powerful message in them after you read them. You really are very talented at writing poetry. These are really great. Thanks for sharing these

[Rose Masen]

This piece, wholly, wraps itself around any type of emotion at different times, and man did you grasp it and release verbally, AMAZINGLY!

[TheFemininePad]

A truly passionate and emotional poem that brings up some painful memories. Anyone who has loved can relate to the subject of this poem. Heartbreak at its very core is a very powerful experience that transforms us as individual. Not being love in return can hurt a lot, and sometimes people can't get over it. This poem is very good, and flows very smoothly.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i can really feel the pain that you put into this poem. heartbreak is the worst kind of pain i know... i can relate. i'm sorry you had to experience that.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

very powerful,and i suspect, deeply personal...i like the lines
'I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me."
beautiful poem,and with word like yours she never will ;)

[.]

Amazing poem of nostalgia/sentiment & Love!

A. Chance

[Dushyant Thadani]

I really love the fact that you are able to pen your feelings so well. The title was amazing, the verses were well directed and the feelings were very well portrayed. Great job Akshat.

[Julie Beth]

this was an amazing poem it was filled with a lot of emotion and i loved it you did an excellent job :D

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is amazing!
I don't even know what I should say!
All in all this is a really amazing poem.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!

~A Fallen Heroine~