Forget me

Forget me to ease your pain...

why two people close their eyes
when kissing?
Because they are so dazzled
by each other.
In that short moment
with my eyes closed...
I'll miss you.

 

 

I love you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

 

 

Forgiving... is giving your hate
just a little room in your heart.

 

 

How badly do I wish
to show you my heart!

 

 

You were the best thing
that ever happened to me.

 

 

How thankful I am to God
for having sent you as a gift to me.

 

 

I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me.

 

 

I smile,laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,

Since I am loosing my memory
but nothing can drive you
out of my body.

Although you've never told me
you loved me...
I know deep in my heart
that you love me.

 

 

Forgive me for leaving you.
Please...

 

 

For the last time
I have a favor to ask.
forget me..

 

 

Reviews

[Dev]

This is a very emotional poem, and I for one liked it a lot. Technically a few things are here and there (I've taken the liberty to edit your poem but it's just as a reference guide. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to.) The idea behind this write is very heart breaking; Losing a lover. Love isn't easy but I guess that's the way everything in life is.

Why do people close their eyes when kissing?
Because they're so dazzled by each other;
In that short moment, with my eyes closed, I miss you.

I have loved you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

Forgiving is giving your hate
Just a little room in your heart.

How badly do I wish to show you my heart!

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.

How thankful am I to God
For sending you as a gift to me.

I don't have to remember you;
You're a part of me.

I smile, laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
Since I am losing my memory,
But nothing can drive you
Out of my body.

Although you've never told me you loved me,
I know deep in my heart that you do.

Forgive me for leaving you.

Please!


For the last time
I have a favor to ask,
Forget me.

[Jazique]

Awe so much saddness and hardest most of all to ask for someone you once love to forget you.

[?]

OMG, are you writing about my life again.
stop it. lol
This is so very emotional. Kinda hit home for me.
Now I must go and cry.

Forgiving... is giving your hate
just a little room in your heart.

Love those lines

[Heather D]

such powerful emotion in this. you can really feel that the author is grieving and is selfless in his request to have his lover forget. great write!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

The ending kind of sneaked up on me. Nice.

[floarealbastra10]

i know exactly how u feel, good write

Nice write .

[kyrie]

This poem is almost heart breaking... The color works perfectly with the message you are trying to send--the gold is light but nostalgic underneath. That word, "Please". It shows the depth of pleading that's really going on behind the memories. It shows the desperate cry that lies behind the colors. Awesome job!

[YouoweYoupay]

This is really sad and touching. Well-expressed emotions and a deep love. I'm sorry for your loss. Thanks for posting.

[jessica Wray]

awwwwwwwwwww i loved it is so nice and sweet

[Bard Constantine]

Nicely written, especially the last stanza, which adds a haunting quality to the poem...