Forget me

Forget me to ease your pain...

why two people close their eyes
when kissing?
Because they are so dazzled
by each other.
In that short moment
with my eyes closed...
I'll miss you.

 

 

I love you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

 

 

Forgiving... is giving your hate
just a little room in your heart.

 

 

How badly do I wish
to show you my heart!

 

 

You were the best thing
that ever happened to me.

 

 

How thankful I am to God
for having sent you as a gift to me.

 

 

I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me.

 

 

I smile,laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,

Since I am loosing my memory
but nothing can drive you
out of my body.

Although you've never told me
you loved me...
I know deep in my heart
that you love me.

 

 

Forgive me for leaving you.
Please...

 

 

For the last time
I have a favor to ask.
forget me..

 

 

Reviews

[Dev]

This is a very emotional poem, and I for one liked it a lot. Technically a few things are here and there (I've taken the liberty to edit your poem but it's just as a reference guide. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to.) The idea behind this write is very heart breaking; Losing a lover. Love isn't easy but I guess that's the way everything in life is.

Why do people close their eyes when kissing?
Because they're so dazzled by each other;
In that short moment, with my eyes closed, I miss you.

I have loved you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

Forgiving is giving your hate
Just a little room in your heart.

How badly do I wish to show you my heart!

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.

How thankful am I to God
For sending you as a gift to me.

I don't have to remember you;
You're a part of me.

I smile, laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
Since I am losing my memory,
But nothing can drive you
Out of my body.

Although you've never told me you loved me,
I know deep in my heart that you do.

Forgive me for leaving you.

Please!


For the last time
I have a favor to ask,
Forget me.

[Amanda_Rose]

omg so sad! sometimes you have to leave the ones you love, but they'll always be a part of you no matter what. i'm sorry if this is based on your real life :( it sounds awful but the poem in itself is wonderful.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good shot..!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime to forget isn't so easy. A sad and powerful story in your poem. In a long life. We will receive and give pain to another. Hard to forgive yourself and time is the only healer for a broken heart. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ian Faraway]

Still a lot of grammatical errors, and not just like one every other line... there's almost one in every line. Message me with one or two of yours poems and I can fix them for you or give you advice.

[Alicia™]

Aww, this is sad. I can feel a lot of emotion coming from behind this, but I also feel that it would be better if you made it just slightly shorter, because that would (in my opinion) make the impact heavier. Another thing is that ellipses have 3 dots. Good job.

[Brad]

we also close our eyes because it's creepy being that close while staring into each others eyeballs...hahaha...

[Chris38]

This was very moving, particularly in the plea at the end. You are asking for the person to forget you for that is best for them, This is a selfless act indeed. A great poem.

[DreyaArt]

This is so beautiful. Simple, yet so powerful, I dont even know, how to react to this, just, breathtaking, and heartbreaking. Thank you for writing this.

Packed full of emotion. If you want to make it technically better, Devyani's suggestions are awesome. Regardless of the formatting, this is a powerful poem that strikes at the reader's core.

[trainwreck]

Great ending!