Forget me

Forget me to ease your pain...

why two people close their eyes
when kissing?
Because they are so dazzled
by each other.
In that short moment
with my eyes closed...
I'll miss you.

 

 

I love you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

 

 

Forgiving... is giving your hate
just a little room in your heart.

 

 

How badly do I wish
to show you my heart!

 

 

You were the best thing
that ever happened to me.

 

 

How thankful I am to God
for having sent you as a gift to me.

 

 

I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me.

 

 

I smile,laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,

Since I am loosing my memory
but nothing can drive you
out of my body.

Although you've never told me
you loved me...
I know deep in my heart
that you love me.

 

 

Forgive me for leaving you.
Please...

 

 

For the last time
I have a favor to ask.
forget me..

 

 

Reviews

[Dev]

This is a very emotional poem, and I for one liked it a lot. Technically a few things are here and there (I've taken the liberty to edit your poem but it's just as a reference guide. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to.) The idea behind this write is very heart breaking; Losing a lover. Love isn't easy but I guess that's the way everything in life is.

Why do people close their eyes when kissing?
Because they're so dazzled by each other;
In that short moment, with my eyes closed, I miss you.

I have loved you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

Forgiving is giving your hate
Just a little room in your heart.

How badly do I wish to show you my heart!

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.

How thankful am I to God
For sending you as a gift to me.

I don't have to remember you;
You're a part of me.

I smile, laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
Since I am losing my memory,
But nothing can drive you
Out of my body.

Although you've never told me you loved me,
I know deep in my heart that you do.

Forgive me for leaving you.

Please!


For the last time
I have a favor to ask,
Forget me.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

This is very sad, but very beautiful at the same time.

My favorite line: "In that short moment
with my eyes closed...
I'll miss you."

Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem.

[A]

You captured this side of the relationship very well, it's realistic how sometimes people have to leave and wish their beloved ones no harm, they wish them well
wish for them to forget them so they don't feel any pain...
lovely and romantic :)

[ForTheWorld]

a sad poem, this poem touched my heart that i even cried because of the flow of the happenings in the poem, i love the poem so much, heart breaker, it's so beautiful!!!!

[Richard Williams]

Opens interestingly and continues to touch throughout. Well done.

[Short.Nerd]

NIce!

[Kate Hunter]

very nicely written. Loved it. This one's going to the library.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

that was just wow.. really good :)

[Marie Harrison]

Ah.. this is so sad. Very powerful poem.

[Dilan Gray]

I really liked this poem. It was very powerful and really well written. Good job.

[Nat.]

This is sad. I like that you are able to write poetry with out forcing rhymes. I often find myself forcing it.