A Friend

A Friend

Someone who is new to me

make faces you will never perceive

Someone you can rely upon

anytime anyplace when you feel alone

All sacrifices she make

no one noticed or thought about

she cried inside those smiles

which make her real inside out

she knows the meaning of friendship

the meaning behind tiny little eyes

the meaning behind those lies

the meaning behind trust

the meaning behind intuition of encrust

she can be everything to you

only if little faith is shown.

she is always with you

when you feel withdrawn.

Author's Note

Read and enjoy everyone :)

Reviews

[Katseye]

Interesting, but you did you switch from "U" to you? Just curious.

[angelina]

It's very sweet. A true friendship never dies no matter how long or how much one may hurt the other. With friendship, you discover a new thing about each other each and every day. Cheers to you and your friend Akshat!! May your friendship never end!!

[LadyNaida]

Aw, is so cute! True friendship is beautiful when you have a friend you can share your life experiences with.

[Ency Bearis]

Meaningful thought and well presented.

[Chris Lotus]

I kinda felt like this poems was speaking more about a special and close friend that could also be seen as a potential lover. Thats just what it said to me or at least how it made me feel. I've had those feelings many times before and I was able to relate to this in that perspective. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for, but I enjoyed the read still. Well done. :)

[Grace Catherine C.]

a very sweet write, simple but meaningful

[TheSweet]

This is lovely. I do believe the whole poem could be summarised as 'she understands' - which is insanely potent as it is, but your version is much more beautiful :) Thanks for sharing.

[aleena1805]

A very sweet poem. I hope she loved it as much as I did. Well done. :)

[Saumya]

'Friends' are the essence of one's life, and a good friend is even more precious
one can get friends easily, but a good friend is rare:)
and then, there r still a few who stay forever:) I wish she remains your good friend forever:)

i liked the beginning of this write,
n these were the best lines:

"she knows the meaning of friendship
the meaning behind tiny little eyes
the meaning behind those lies
the meaning behind trust
the meaning behind intuition of encrust"

a truly wonderful write:)
well done, n Happy Birthday to your friend:)

[Brittni]

THe kind of gift from the heart money can't buy. Great work!