God's Greatest Creation

No one understands you better than your mom...

She is special

Lovely and graceful

She gives a helpful hand when in need

She is great indeed 

Just think and she is already there 

With a big heart and care

She has many responsibilities and burdens

Which we can't even imagine

She gives all her time to those she loves dearly

And never complains or gets angry

She is beautiful and alive! 

She is the one 

Only one

Without whom we can't survive

She can consume all the pain

And will never have someone to blame

She hides all the pain 

Perhaps,"she would not want to appear constrained"

She is the tree that you lean upon,

She is the solution when you feel withdrawn

She is the heart that beats inside you,

Which you can't miscue

She lives with you,

She lives for you,

She feels for you,

For her loved ones she would die
Until we have children,we can't know why

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. A beautiful for your mother. They are the most important people in our life. They teach us love and kindness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Myenigma]

moms rulez!
its good but change

and never take anyone's blame
to
will never have someone to blame

and the last stanza add "do" instead of knew or you can change it to "which you wouldn't even know."

[Akshat♥]

Thanks a lot dear..I have corrected it :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Reminded me of an Ozzy song, Mamma, I comin home

[Akshat♥]

I have never heard this Ozzy song...Am glad that it reminded you of some good memories :)
Thank you :)

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
My Mother is still alive. While - she is no longer permitted to visit me, she still writes me. And I'm not permitted to write her back. So - yes - remember the happy times as they were, for these will carry you through your Autumn Years, Akshat ...

[Akshat♥]

I will :)
Thank you :)

[Luke L]

Lovely piece, what a heartfelt dedication to mothers! I think you shouldn't focus on structuring things in a really exact way all the time... the last sentence to me it looks like you chose "knew" instead of "know" just to rhyme. I think you should change that word. All and all I great piece though

[Akshat♥]

Yeah you caught me :D
I tried...give some suggestion if you have some time :)
Thank you :)

[Aethereal]

You've captured a natural truth in this poem. Mother's know their children because they know themselves. Biologist say that a child inherits most of her physical features by way of her paternal line, but most of her mental features by way of her maternal line. In psychic terms, mothers are closer to their children than their fathers. Mothers seem to know what we're thinking without us saying.

[Akshat♥]

Yeah very true!
Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)

[Mark]

Sweet poem. A lovely testament, I hope you showed it to your mother. :)

The last two lines need some changing

she can even die for you
which you can't even knew

'knew' is grammatically incorrect, the correct usage would 'know' which doesn't rhyme.

[Akshat♥]

Yeah you caught me :D
I just tried to rhyme somehow :P
Give some suggestions if you are free :)
Thank you :)

[Mark]

For her loved ones she would die
Until we have children, we can't know why.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[SyberRose]

Sweet and adorable...enjoyed...Rose

[Akshat♥]

Thank you Rose :)

[Sami Khalil]

A great ode to moms . Splendid...:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)