God's Greatest Creation

No one understands you better than your mom...

She is special

Lovely and graceful

She gives a helpful hand when in need

She is great indeed 

Just think and she is already there 

With a big heart and care

She has many responsibilities and burdens

Which we can't even imagine

She gives all her time to those she loves dearly

And never complains or gets angry

She is beautiful and alive! 

She is the one 

Only one

Without whom we can't survive

She can consume all the pain

And will never have someone to blame

She hides all the pain 

Perhaps,"she would not want to appear constrained"

She is the tree that you lean upon,

She is the solution when you feel withdrawn

She is the heart that beats inside you,

Which you can't miscue

She lives with you,

She lives for you,

She feels for you,

For her loved ones she would die
Until we have children,we can't know why

Author's Note

Try to give honest reviews ...and rate it too :)
I will really appreciate it :)
Thanks for giving your precious time :)

Reviews

[Infinite hexes]

Cute

[Akshat♥]

ty :)

[MandaBear]

Beautiful poem about mothers! I for one love my mother. in facts she is my best friend =)

[Akshat♥]

Am glad to hear that... Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Beautiful tribute Akshat, 'she never gets angry', you've got one stellar mom there, lovely!

[Akshat♥]

I know...Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Lucky you & my pleasure :-)

[Akshat♥]

haha....everyone is lucky..just love your mom :D

[shallimarRose]

wonderful tribute to moms.. It's so true.. until you have a child of your own it is difficult to understand just how deep that love is.. nice work.. shallimarRose

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[B-poet]

This is a great way to pay homage to one person who carried you for nine months & birthed you into this world. Loved the sentimental pictures that gave a meaningful distinction in regards to this special poem. Great work. A riveting write & read. :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Astro]

I grew up with only one parent, my mom, so I love this one Akshat. There are some very great sentiments expressed here and I feel a connection with all of them. Great job. There was one line though, that I thought was a little off grammatically, "Because she can't see you in constrain". I think it could be reworked a bit, but I still know what you were trying to say, so that's why I still think you have done well.

[Akshat♥]

Can you please tell me some other line to replace that?
("Because she can't see you in constrain")
Try to rhyme it ...
Thank you :)

[Astro]

Perhaps, "She would not want to appear constrained." "She would not want to show constraint."
Either would be clearer grammatically, but it is your poem and these are only suggestions.

[Akshat♥]

ok..thank you :)

[Astro]

You are welcome. :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Aw, I love this so much! Wonderful write!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Hatchling]

Beautifully written darling

[Akshat♥]

Thank you hun :)

[Hatchling]

You're very welcome

[poetdoug]

A wise man wisely once said: "God could not be everywhere so He created Mother."
That is exactly what you have proven with your excellent and classic penmanship my friend.
Thanks

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Saumya]

this was just grreat....
i completely loved and enjoyd reading this....n for a while really thougt that i was reading something about my own mother.....:)
mother....the word itself is sooo sweet and great
she's the one who really does a lot for us entire life......

they are so so so wonderful, that even this wrd itself seems to be very small in front of her virtues....!!

i think God gave the same set of hearts to evry mother....all of them are splendid in their own way,and seem to be the same:)

she's beyond anything and evrythng else in this world:)
have really no more words to define them further:)

a biiiiiiiig applaud and huge love to alll the really lovely mothers:)

a completely heartfelt read and write....!!!!

very well done:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much Saumya :)

[Saumya]

youre welcmd:)..!!!