God's Greatest Creation

No one understands you better than your mom...

She is special

Lovely and graceful

She gives a helpful hand when in need

She is great indeed 

Just think and she is already there 

With a big heart and care

She has many responsibilities and burdens

Which we can't even imagine

She gives all her time to those she loves dearly

And never complains or gets angry

She is beautiful and alive! 

She is the one 

Only one

Without whom we can't survive

She can consume all the pain

And will never have someone to blame

She hides all the pain 

Perhaps,"she would not want to appear constrained"

She is the tree that you lean upon,

She is the solution when you feel withdrawn

She is the heart that beats inside you,

Which you can't miscue

She lives with you,

She lives for you,

She feels for you,

For her loved ones she would die
Until we have children,we can't know why

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jazique]

Oh my gosh, oh m gosh. Can I take this for mothers because as this poem continued I grew in love with it more and more by the second. It was really a wonderful poem; from the bottom of heart well done. It makes me smile and I'm sure every mother in the world is too.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Jazique]

Oh my gosh, oh m gosh. Can I take this for mothers because as this poem continued I grew in love with it more and more by the second. It was really a wonderful poem; from the bottom of heart well done. It makes me smile and I'm sure every mother in the world is too.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you jaz :)
oh my gosh lol :D

[Leslie Philibert]

nice romantic write, written with care...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Chris Lotus]

I felt this was very eloquent and sincere. I read this and could see it in a very special Mother's Day card. Excellent work!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[Lisa Victoria]

A very beautiful tribute to mothers....I love the last line, " Until we have children, we can't know why"
This is so true, you can never understand the unconditional love a mother has for her children until you become a parent and fall in love with your precious child. Well done!

Lisa:)

[Akshat♥]

You are absolutely right :)
Thank you :)

[smilempsn]

Its always nice to read about Mothers...
Everyone has a special feeling towards her... Yet everyone's feelings luk like same as ours...

Nice one Akshat :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Rita L. Sev]

A very sweet write, a wonderful tribute to good mothers everywhere!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you rita :)

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Lovely I am a mommas boy lol and so true lovely....

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[TL Boehm]

nicely penned. Most mothers truly are as you have so eloquently described in this poem. Well done.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Kristin Lee]

A mother's love is a truly special gift.

[Akshat♥]

Yes,So true! Thank you :)