God's Greatest Creation

No one understands you better than your mom...

She is special

Lovely and graceful

She gives a helpful hand when in need

She is great indeed 

Just think and she is already there 

With a big heart and care

She has many responsibilities and burdens

Which we can't even imagine

She gives all her time to those she loves dearly

And never complains or gets angry

She is beautiful and alive! 

She is the one 

Only one

Without whom we can't survive

She can consume all the pain

And will never have someone to blame

She hides all the pain 

Perhaps,"she would not want to appear constrained"

She is the tree that you lean upon,

She is the solution when you feel withdrawn

She is the heart that beats inside you,

Which you can't miscue

She lives with you,

She lives for you,

She feels for you,

For her loved ones she would die
Until we have children,we can't know why

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Snehal G]

'Mother'
Very nicely expressed. I am moved by this portrait of mother by a loving and grateful son. Keep it up.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[M. Stein]

Those last two lines do an amazing job at summing everything into just simple bliss. So elegantly written. I really enjoyed! Thanks for sharing

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Purva Pathak]

its sweet :* spl. dose last two lines... :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
I liked this write, it is a thought provoking word tapestry. I never rate as I'm not qualified.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Mom's are God's angels. Here you've penned a great testimony. Although this sounds too perfect, never gets angry? I want I mother to show her children she is human. Just a thought.

[Akshat♥]

lol...i got your point :)
Thank you :)

[Petals & Pearls]

The rhyming is a bit off, which halts the flow of the poem... beautiful feelings though, I appreciate your emotions within this piece.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Ankita]

Nicely written with true feelings. "Just think and she's already there/With a big heart and care." So true. She can sacrifice her everything for her children. Keep writing Akshat.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you ankita :)

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I love my mom too. Thank you for sharing it was a very kind hearted piece.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[uzair zahid]

it makes me emotional.... it is really nice and all true...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Every word that you wrote made me think of my own mother. This poem is wonderful. You couldn't wrote it any better. The poem flows so very well. This is the best mothers poem that I have read so far. thanks for sharing it!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you Bridget ...I am really glad that you liked it :)