My Sweet Girl

I just wrote it after thinking about it :)

She is what I have always wanted.

 

She looks beautiful in anything

But she is not one to be vain. 

Like an adorable baby girl,

She always wants to cuddle.

 

She is the lyrics to all of my songs,

Which I want to hear all lifelong.

She loves to eat chocolate,

Something I never deny.

 

She is the heart inside of my chest,

She is the answer to my prayers,

She is the mirror of my dreams,

She brings smiles to everyone she meets.

 

She has an unforgettable face,

And a naturally shy nature.

She will bring out the best

and worse hidden inside of you.

 

She has faith in God,

But believes equally in all religion.

She has so many friends,

And loves them without measure.

 

She is all that I have ever wanted. 

Author's Note

Give honest reviews as long as you want :)
Thank you :)

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Enjoyed Reading and liked the photos too...Rose

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sounds like a sweet girl to me

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[dw817]

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I can't promise a long review. It's nicely written, and colored. The ending artwork by Bethany is cutting off somehow unfortunately.
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And who is the sweet girl from whom your prose praises ? :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[rhythm&blues]

I would have to agree with what Lori said, I was confused as to who this poem was dedicated to also. Nice work nonetheless.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I think the pictures of a very young girl are misleading to what you've posted here.. sounds more like a daughter than a girlfriend.. otherwise, the poem is quite nice and a sweet tribute

[Akshat♥]

I have changed the pics now..Thank you :)

[Prritiy]

She is the heart that I am having
She is the answer to my prayers
She is the mirror of my dreams

nice lines.

so are very much in love with this sweet girl.
best wishes for your love life and future.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Dayran]

It must be nice to be in touch with that part of us that is the well spring of our impulses. Inspiring.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Beautiful poem bro. Loved it and loved the lines mentioned below.

She is the lyrics to my songs
Which I want to hear lifelong
She loves to eat chocolate
Which I never underestimate

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you ji )

[Meera Krishna]

Well...this poem looks more like an essay. You could have used figure of speech more effectively and i dont know of any small girl who takes religion seriously. Don't mind.....you wanted honest reviews and i wrote what i felt.

[Akshat♥]

this is about a girl..not about a small girl :)
Never mind...i got your point..thanks :)

[smilempsn]

Nice one Akshat :)

Just a clarification.. is the word in last line of first para is 'cuddle' or 'curdle' only ??

'She will bring out the best
and worst which is hidden inside you'

Very nicely framed... :)

Wish you all the very best with the 'She' in your life :) :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)