My Sweet Girl

I just wrote it after thinking about it :)

She is what I have always wanted.

 

She looks beautiful in anything

But she is not one to be vain. 

Like an adorable baby girl,

She always wants to cuddle.

 

She is the lyrics to all of my songs,

Which I want to hear all lifelong.

She loves to eat chocolate,

Something I never deny.

 

She is the heart inside of my chest,

She is the answer to my prayers,

She is the mirror of my dreams,

She brings smiles to everyone she meets.

 

She has an unforgettable face,

And a naturally shy nature.

She will bring out the best

and worse hidden inside of you.

 

She has faith in God,

But believes equally in all religion.

She has so many friends,

And loves them without measure.

 

She is all that I have ever wanted. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[prachi prangya agasti]

great description of her in the poem.... enjoyed reading this

[Akshat♥]

Thank you Prachi :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The photo of the girl is beautiful. I like the description of her in your poem. Some woman leave us with desire and need forever. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Akshat♥]

You said truth coyote ...Thank you :)

[Saumya]

this was a reallllly exceptionally great description....!!!!
each and every word written here could be easily imagined...
the language, as usual, was simple but effective....
the most interesting part....which i think ,was great here, was.....the words, although were simple, but had that wonderful power to define a really great girl...!!!

i completely enjoyed reading it....
a great read and write....!!!!
well done :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Pallavi Chaturvedi]

Really it was a special way of showing your love to that special girl that how much she is special for you :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you Pallavi :)

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Aww, this is really cute! :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[TL Boehm]

She has so many friends and loves them without measure. I loved the way you described the perfect girl mostly by her emotional attributes and her belief system rather than her physical appearance.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

The emotional depth of this one is quite beautiful. You painted a picture here that shows the love of a child in stark clarity. Lots of great imagery; very specific too, which is nice. The wording could use a little work, just in terms of tense and things like that (feel free to message me if you'd like a more detailed critique in that respect), but overall, I enjoyed this sweet little journey.

[Akshat♥]

Give your some time to me...help me with tenses and the things that you feel are absent :)
Thank you :)

[Sneha]

A really cute description :) adorable

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Neha Godambe]

Adorable... Ur girl is lucky, i must say

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)