My Sweet Girl

I just wrote it after thinking about it :)

She is what I have always wanted.

 

She looks beautiful in anything

But she is not one to be vain. 

Like an adorable baby girl,

She always wants to cuddle.

 

She is the lyrics to all of my songs,

Which I want to hear all lifelong.

She loves to eat chocolate,

Something I never deny.

 

She is the heart inside of my chest,

She is the answer to my prayers,

She is the mirror of my dreams,

She brings smiles to everyone she meets.

 

She has an unforgettable face,

And a naturally shy nature.

She will bring out the best

and worse hidden inside of you.

 

She has faith in God,

But believes equally in all religion.

She has so many friends,

And loves them without measure.

 

She is all that I have ever wanted. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very meaningful and sweet...
sounds like you wrote it straight from your heart :)
GREAT WRITE :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Jyoti Dhawan]

Very beautiful and nicely written :-)

[Akshat♥]

thank you jyoti :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is very sweet.Written with sugar and spice and everything nice:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Akshat:)

[Daisy Morgy]

aww this it lovely, the way you have described feelings is wonderfull!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you 😊

[Heather]

This is beautifully written!! Such love!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[tHe]

This poem seems to be the ideal love. Caring, thoughtful, modest. Brilliant write, you trully are a talented writer

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
I liked your write; you seem to have been smitten. It would seem to me the most important aspect of a soul mate is friendship. And the most important features are her smile and eyes, as they show the true inside of her pneuma.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Izzy-01]

i liked it cause you gave a vivd description of the character in a very subtle yet difficult to forget kind of way

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Steven Cetta]

Nice!!! Sounds like what I feel for my girl.

[Akshat♥]

That's nice :)
Thank you :)

[StarSandwich]

It started really like soft and continues that way trough. Its rhymes are a little strange though, however thats your style and its good in its own way!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)