Since The Day I Met You
A Poem by
Akshat♥
Just came to my mind :)
Since the day I met you You brighten up my life We talk so less The silence was so right We found care in each other's eyes Since the day I met you My silence is over My weakness turned into strength You become by motivation You take me away from my lonely life Since the day I met you My day gets over so fast I love each and every moment of my life Whenever you say 'Hi' it felt like you touched my heart and there's nothing left to prove Since the day I met you It felt like I already knew you Your face seems so familiar all the scars you have shows the strength of you Since the day I met you Sharing is an excuse to be with you You changed the way I saw the world
© 2014 Akshat♥
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I gave this romantic caring heartfelt poem 100 rating . we all fall in love and many times some continue to love when another has gone a stray this is beautiful I hope to see more of you writings soon. Greatly and well put together. You have it in you that sweet love and romance what ever girl you have a hold of in heart should feel and be lucky and greatful to have such love. God Bless.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you...check out my new poem-a friend:)
9 Years Ago
Will do not a problem happy thanksgiving
9 Years Ago
happy thanksgiving to you too :)
Reviews
Very sweet and heart felt. Great job capturing those feelings of twiterpation.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Very sweet and heart felt. Great job capturing those feelings of twiterpation.
This is really a sweet write! Great job!
Posted 11 Years Ago
This is really a sweet write! Great job!
Very smiley. Its warm and blushing, but it isn't overly sentimental. Great job!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Very smiley. Its warm and blushing, but it isn't overly sentimental. Great job!
Thoughts nicely penned down Akshat :)
well I wish you happiness with the person, because of which this 'thought' came into ur mind..
Posted 11 Years Ago
Thoughts nicely penned down Akshat :)
well I wish you happiness with the person, because of which this 'thought' came into ur mind..
love it..so cute :')
Posted 11 Years Ago
love it..so cute :')
a very cute piece :) nicely written
Posted 11 Years Ago
a very cute piece :) nicely written
A beautiful romantic poem, heartfelt write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A beautiful romantic poem, heartfelt write.
"Since the day I met you
My silence is over
My weakness turned into strength
You become by motivation
You take me away
from my lonely life
Since the day I met you"
Beautiful romance in a beautiful poem...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
"Since the day I met you
My silence is over
My weakness turned into strength
You become by motivation
You take me away
from my lonely life
Since the day I met you"
Beautiful romance in a beautiful poem...:)
Only to be young again ha....very nice indeed...loved the photos too...Rose
Posted 11 Years Ago
Only to be young again ha....very nice indeed...loved the photos too...Rose
Good use of image and realy nice write. Like this line the most: "You changed the way I saw the world".That is exactly what happens when you meet the special person.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Good use of image and realy nice write. Like this line the most: "You changed the way I saw the world".That is exactly what happens when you meet the special person.
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Added on June 16, 2013
Last Updated on May 9, 2014
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Akshat♥ New Delhi, India
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