Since The Day I Met You
A Poem by
Akshat♥
Just came to my mind :)
Since the day I met you You brighten up my life We talk so less The silence was so right We found care in each other's eyes Since the day I met you My silence is over My weakness turned into strength You become by motivation You take me away from my lonely life Since the day I met you My day gets over so fast I love each and every moment of my life Whenever you say 'Hi' it felt like you touched my heart and there's nothing left to prove Since the day I met you It felt like I already knew you Your face seems so familiar all the scars you have shows the strength of you Since the day I met you Sharing is an excuse to be with you You changed the way I saw the world
© 2014 Akshat♥
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I gave this romantic caring heartfelt poem 100 rating . we all fall in love and many times some continue to love when another has gone a stray this is beautiful I hope to see more of you writings soon. Greatly and well put together. You have it in you that sweet love and romance what ever girl you have a hold of in heart should feel and be lucky and greatful to have such love. God Bless.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you...check out my new poem-a friend:)
9 Years Ago
Will do not a problem happy thanksgiving
9 Years Ago
happy thanksgiving to you too :)
Reviews
Beautifully written
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautifully written
my honest review is...a good write.Like the way you break the quintain in the third stanza, and the good graphics!
Posted 11 Years Ago
my honest review is...a good write.Like the way you break the quintain in the third stanza, and the good graphics!
Such a wonderful write brother silence of love and more which i learned ;)
Best Lines :
Since the day I met you
My day gets over so fast
I love each and every
moment of my life!
Cheers!
Singh :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Such a wonderful write brother silence of love and more which i learned ;)
Best Lines :
Since the day I met you
My day gets over so fast
I love each and every
moment of my life!
Cheers!
Singh :)
The idea of someone changing the way you look at the world is very romantic. This is a nice piece of devotion you've penned.
Posted 11 Years Ago
The idea of someone changing the way you look at the world is very romantic. This is a nice piece of devotion you've penned.
oh, that's pretty good...!!!
again, very eloquent, and fabulous......
a great work indeed.....
well done ...!!
impressive
keep writing and rocking...
with best wishes,
saumya
Posted 11 Years Ago
oh, that's pretty good...!!!
again, very eloquent, and fabulous......
a great work indeed.....
well done ...!!
impressive
keep writing and rocking...
with best wishes,
saumya
Nice poem, Really nice emotions... I can definetly feel a connect to it... Beautifully written... :) :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice poem, Really nice emotions... I can definetly feel a connect to it... Beautifully written... :) :)
Not my usual type of read, but I know how it feels, and since I can relate to it I'd say you've done a good job as a writer.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Not my usual type of read, but I know how it feels, and since I can relate to it I'd say you've done a good job as a writer.
Lovely!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Lovely!
Ah the love poem. Good job
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ah the love poem. Good job
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Added on June 16, 2013
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Akshat♥ New Delhi, India
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