Since The Day I Met You
A Poem by
Akshat♥
Just came to my mind :)
Since the day I met you You brighten up my life We talk so less The silence was so right We found care in each other's eyes Since the day I met you My silence is over My weakness turned into strength You become by motivation You take me away from my lonely life Since the day I met you My day gets over so fast I love each and every moment of my life Whenever you say 'Hi' it felt like you touched my heart and there's nothing left to prove Since the day I met you It felt like I already knew you Your face seems so familiar all the scars you have shows the strength of you Since the day I met you Sharing is an excuse to be with you You changed the way I saw the world
© 2014 Akshat♥
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I gave this romantic caring heartfelt poem 100 rating . we all fall in love and many times some continue to love when another has gone a stray this is beautiful I hope to see more of you writings soon. Greatly and well put together. You have it in you that sweet love and romance what ever girl you have a hold of in heart should feel and be lucky and greatful to have such love. God Bless.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you...check out my new poem-a friend:)
9 Years Ago
Will do not a problem happy thanksgiving
9 Years Ago
happy thanksgiving to you too :)
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ravishing.
very nicely penned.
Posted 11 Years Ago
ravishing.
very nicely penned.
This was a really good poem! Great job, my favorite line was all the scars you have
shows the strength of you. Or maybe lines.. Anywho, great poem!
Posted 11 Years Ago
This was a really good poem! Great job, my favorite line was all the scars you have
shows the strength of you. Or maybe lines.. Anywho, great poem!
Oooh my goodness I loved this!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Oooh my goodness I loved this!
Lovely poem Akshat! You have captured all the sentiments very well!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Lovely poem Akshat! You have captured all the sentiments very well!
A most telling and unargued piece, well done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A most telling and unargued piece, well done.
Its amazing how one person can change your viewpoint on this thing we call life. good work.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Its amazing how one person can change your viewpoint on this thing we call life. good work.
Love is in the air! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Love is in the air! :)
I liked the rhythm it was such a great poem to read .
Posted 11 Years Ago
I liked the rhythm it was such a great poem to read .
Nice one now!! Who is it Ashu???? ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nice one now!! Who is it Ashu???? ;)
Lovely! Its amazing how one person can change you so much and make you wonder how you ever lived without them.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Lovely! Its amazing how one person can change you so much and make you wonder how you ever lived without them.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 16, 2013
Last Updated on May 9, 2014
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Akshat♥ New Delhi, India
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hello(Namaste),
You can call me (or ashu),
I LOVE MYSELF...!! :-P I am methodical,practical and a great friend....!!! I never make snap decisions, preferring to weigh the pros and cons of every..
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