I gave this romantic caring heartfelt poem 100 rating . we all fall in love and many times some continue to love when another has gone a stray this is beautiful I hope to see more of you writings soon. Greatly and well put together. You have it in you that sweet love and romance what ever girl you have a hold of in heart should feel and be lucky and greatful to have such love. God Bless.
Again, the flow isn't right... if you are to rhyme anything in a poem, the the rest of the poem must fallow suit and the composition of the first stanza, with only a few exceptions.
For me, a bit too soppy. But that's just because I'm a miserable sot :P I did, however, quite like the message, and feelings like that are worthy to write in a poem :) So, thanks for sharing.
Since the day I met you
Sharing is an excuse to be with you
You changed the way I saw the world
as i said these poems i am reading are hitting home because i am hopelessly devoted to a girl and love comes unconditional between her and myself
another sweet poem.. I really like the flow of this one. My only suggestion.. lose the colored fonts. Not only are they distracting, but if you were ever to get your poetry published, no editors would take your work seriously. The poem should direct emphasis, not the color of the font. Just a suggestion.
hello(Namaste),
You can call me (or ashu),
I LOVE MYSELF...!! :-P I am methodical,practical and a great friend....!!! I never make snap decisions, preferring to weigh the pros and cons of every.. more..