Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[Ryan Prudnick]

Love it! Message we all know, but need to be reminded of from time to time.

[Akshat♥]

you are absolutely right here...thank you:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in these words. Always go forward and don't look back at mistakes made. I like the complete poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Akshat♥]

thank you for your review :)

[Arielle Ann]

Inspirational and exact words spoken directly from the heart!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Kajal Gulabani]

Totally agreed.. Positivity does wonders.. Nice read

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[khalid]

wow..that is really so sweet, great, enouraging, challenging..i loved the message you have been sending here. many disabled people could by using their will be better than many normal people. hats off for this poem..

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[KeeD]

inspirational and well written :) had a very honest approach and makes me feel that there is still hope in this world :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this is absolutly beautiful, I believe the picture really catches the readers attention and makes them want to read the poem, this poem here is exactly how the world is and we dont see just how lucky we really are.

[Akshat♥]

You are so right here dear...thank you :)

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

No thank you for writing this amazing piece

[Akshat♥]

:)

[RJ620Win]

you bring us hope to fill our dreams no matter how hard life is, two thumbs up for you! :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Lily Mae]

You bring some simple truths up with this write that we sometimes forget.. Especially..while we are wishing our own lives away..some one else may be dreaming of how they would love to live our life.. Interesting.. I like that way you brought that to the light.. xo Excellent write..x

[Akshat♥]

Your words really touched me...thank you so much:)

[Alexa Tasch]

I like how you add stress to words by coloring them, its very creative. Over this is a great piece. The message is very inspiring! Great poem!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)