Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[Anuvart]

yes we all need to be positive in life..
thank you for sharing this write

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Mary E. Green]

A good one that people can relate to. It is honest. Good job.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[RG]

A very relate-able poem. This is how most of us feel when depressed.

"Don't crush yourself from inside" , something I keep telling myself.

Great write!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Holly Mason]

Anne Frank felt the same way
truly lovely thoughts
thank you for sharing

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Hitman]

Awesome,nicely written :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Sunflower 20]

very honest piece of advice, and very relevant to many people, including me. thank you for sharing :)
my favourite line: you hate your life, while someone dreams of having your life.

wonderful :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beautiful and very inspiring. Great write...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

A really well written poem and the picture adds to its gravity.....
It's inspiring...
Although i would like you to check your 9th line...
"eventually that happiness *will come/comes* back to you.."
:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for telling the mistake:)

[YouoweYoupay]

What a lovely, hope filled reminder. Thank you for posting. It's something many of us need nowadays. Be positive.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Honest piece :)
Nice one Akshat

[Akshat♥]

Thank you Kanchan :)

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

:)