Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[The adventurer]

To the point,
written it well.....

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Kruppz]

Thanks for cheering us up! :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I know this poem was intended to make your readers to feel good on the inside, but I also sense that there are undertones of confidence and self-determination in here as well...I feel that these layers make your poem even more pleasant to read.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much dear:)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're welcome

[Buddhistboy73]

Great write my friend...:)
It's useful to see things from another perspective, and with this poem you show how. So for that I thank you. Not always an easy task, but I feel that it is something we can cultivate when we make efforts....

The last 3 lines are reassuring and compassionate.....:)
BB

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Veronica Chandler]

Such lovely sentiment and a message so important, all laid out with such an easy flow as to move me gently along with your thought stream. I so appreciate your message and the manner you laid it out; from the colored text to the image the piece is well rounded and a delight to read.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Veronica Chandler]

My pleasure...I am just getting around to read requests that have collected dust for a long time.

[Akshat♥]

I understand :)

[Veronica Chandler]

:-)

[Manpreet]

I feel this is a nice piece. I does not need rhyming or word count because it could express in a most simple manner.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[fallen.angel.]

That was so beautiful, and honest, and true

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I love positive poetry, so of course I enjoyed this one :-) Writer's Cafe needs more positivity like this!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Leigh]

I agree nice thoughts - a well thought out piece of writing

[Carrie Manor]

I agree, we should strive to find positivity in our lives, even its' just a little bit everyday. If we could just help even one person today, this world would indeed be a better place. Great right! :-)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)